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for The American

by KraeHi

schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait to read the rest!
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I tend to have something against made up characters in fanfics, but this is a good idea and I like where this story is going. I like the thought of Severus having to rely on somone, a muggle even, and then he's still carrying around the picture he stole of Lily. So it looks to me like you're going to have to show him coming to terms with her death while in the house of another woman ;) Update soon :)
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Well I hope you update soon. I really want to know what is going to happen next.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update loved it, Keep it coming luv'
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it write more=)
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon Pleaseee''