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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH you are trying to kill us with the cliffies... don't deny it!!! ::pulls out wand and tries spells long distance:: crap doesnt work... oh well. Loved the Chapter.
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope that Severus will be able to save Hermione with Poppy and Dumbledore's help. I don't think that Severus would want to live without her since he has been with her for such a long time. I can't wait to read more.
person kittycat30
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've read the chapter twice... can't he see she needs his love? He obviously feels something for her! Now I'm waiting to see what's really wrong... is she pregnant? Hm, that would be a great twist I'd love to see *grins*
person lilinda
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I also think she's pregnant. It would be so fluffly!!! *-* But first Severus would have to recognize he loves her.
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What happened? Get back here! Great update btw I can't wait for more!
person lilinda
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Quando
person lilinda
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person YouandMe
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I absolutely love this story... you are an incredible writer. Once I started reading it, it was hard for me to stop, and even going out about my day, I found my mind wandering back to this story. I really hope you keep writing more, and I hope to see another chapter really soon. Love and kisses, Joy
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok... I finally managed to get enough time here and there to read it all. Please tell me you're going to finish it. Please update me on when you add to it. talene02002@yahoo.com
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing, I cannot wait for more!