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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you how much I have enjoyed this story. You have a tremendous imagination. One element that I especially enjoy is your ability to creat new characters that are believable in the context of the Harry Potter world. I have read several stories where orignal characters did not seem to 'fit', but yours work, especially Snape's grandmother. I can image her as part of the original cast. Bravo!
PS Is there going to be an epilogue? I would love an epilogue!
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, I love this story and what a great ending after all the teasing. look forward to your next tale.

Lu
person Anon
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Cruelty is thy name. I can't believe you left a cliffy like this. I'm so nervous. I'm really hoping that his letter just says that he needs the space while he take his time to think about the whole commitment thing. Please? Fantastic update. I can't wait for more!!
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. The curse has been lifted for a while now and still Severus is trying to break away from her. I hope that he will return to her and finally admit that he truly loves her. I think that his own grandmother would be disappointed in him for hurting Hermione. Also Albus should never have made him promise to let her go. I can't wait to read more to see how this story ends.
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please let there be a happy ending!!! I love this story. They so belong together. Its about time someone put Dumbledore in his place! Though I have to say that it would be interesting to see if he actually speaks to Rita Skeeter. Something tells me that if he did that he would know the true fear of Hermione Granger! LOL! Excellent work and I hope you update very quickly.
person elladee
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read this whole story, save for the final chapter of course, and I'm simply in awe! Your brilliant writing and wonderful plot have had me on the edge of my seat. I'm looking forward to reading the last chapter~!!
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story just keeps getting better and better! The romantic in me is hoping that you end this torment between the two soon. Excellent work and update, update, update!!! LOL!
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww :o(
Well, that's not nice of Dumbledore. What a meanie! I object, Severus and Hermione NEED to be together and live happily ever after!