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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was an incredible story. I enjoyed reading it. I am glad that Severus and Hermione got back together and decided to get married now that they have bonded with each other.
person elladee
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for a lovely ending! I've become such a fan of the two stories you've posted here at AFF that I wandered over to Ashwinder to check out more! So thanks also for indirectly leading me back to that site, I hadn't visited it in a few years...! ;D
person kittycat30
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* I'm trying to think of what to say. The ending here was just beautiful! I absolutely loved this story!
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Wow!! and Wow again!!! We'll that was some journey. One of the best fics I have ever read. You kept me guessing the whole time and it never got stale. With some Fics I would Sometimes skip a particularly boring paragraph but i was hanging onto every single word of every chapter here.

Well done and thank you from the bottom of my heart!!!
person shelagh
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful ending to a fantastic story!!!!!!!!!!!1
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love it! I love it!
So glad you continued and finished! Yay! There WAS a happily ever after!
I hope you write an epilogue or something where you talk about them 15 years in the future or something w/ kids :o)
Thanks for a great read!
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing and for finishing this, I love to have a story end properly, and it was very beautiful. You know it's good when, at the end of the story, you feel kind of - sad! Great work.
person neelix
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I stayed up until 2 a.m. to finish reading this!

Perfect..... just perfect.
person CB13
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All the difficulties they suffered in the early chapters were more than made up for by the loveliness of the later ones. Beautifully, richly done. Thank you!

Cheers

CB
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just beautiful. I really loved this last chapter. So good.