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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Yaay! I randomly turn from Snarry fics to Hermions/Snape, and was directed here by a very helpful soul from the Yahoo group Borgin and Burks! And wow, am I ever greatful. This story was amazing, there wasn't any part of it I disliked. I adore your Severus, and love that you gave him a family, it was such a nice change!

I also love that you didn't pair Harry with Ginny!!! So THANKS A BILLION for that too!

Loved all your charaters, although I was a bit puzzled by Hermione's parents being called Leigh and Richard; I'm assuming 'Leigh' is her mother, but I always thought Leigh was a masculine name. I can't think if JKR ever named Hermione's parents, and so if this is her doing, then sorry! Haha!

Anyway, great story! Thnk you very much for writing it!

Mu xxx
person AeraVale
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful... Just finished reading the story (all in one go, took up a whole day, just couldn't walk away!). It's wonderful, you captured Snape's snide character perfectly, as you did Hermione's gentle, passionate character. And the transition to Snape as a loving man was done so well! The last chapter was particularly moving, I loved the part where Snape was given the Order. It was the sort of ending the real Harry Potter books should have had. Snape was such a momentous character in the books and while his death was quite touching, I did feel it lacked something. You nailed it though! Bravo!
Ok, so I'm going to stop gushing on about how cool this story was. You're a very skilled writer, please keep it up. I'll regularly be checking to see if you do!
xxxxxxx Aera
schedule November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww this story was great!! you did a wonderful job with it. It was well written and had a great plot!!!
you get 2 thumbs up.. Great job!!!
person amd2175
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I REALLY hope you write a sequel!!!!
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have read hundreds of SS/HG fanfic and i must say that this is in my top ten. It is well written, imaginative, creative, realistic, historical, and sexy. "the love you take" had me captured at all times and always made me wanting more. Thank you for sharing your talent and passion. it was a pleasure to read.
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have loved ready this the whole time. It has been a lovely story, one of my favorites. Beautifully written.
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MAAAAAAAAAAH! This story was so beautiful that I almost begun to cry in the end! I simply loved it. This is, by far, the best Hermione/Severus I have ever read! So wonderful and well written and intruiging and... and.. WOW! I can't discribe how much I enjoyed it! This is the only story I have actually reread because I can't get enough of it! There were always something new and interesting in ever chapter. Every word was just so right! And I got so angry with Dumbledore for trying to keep them apart in the end... EVIL! But everything was fine in the end. I'm glad you didn't added a wedding or something, that would just be too much. This was perfect!
Have you written any books of your own? Because if you have, I would so buy them and read them! I loved this story!
LOVED!
Miya
person marcia
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Loved the ending, actually just loved the whole thing. Great job with the twists and turns it took.
person Tenar10r
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Happy sob* I Love this story!
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I loved it! I can't believe it is over. What a ride. Thanks so much. It was an incredible read. Excellent and unique plot. The writing was top rate. Please write more soon!