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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo, I CAN NOT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE! xD
I love this story so much.
I have to admit to having a soft spot for Viktor...
He was the first guy to make Hermione feel beautiful.
I can see some jealousy about to happen. Can't wait!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well. What did Severus expect? Karma is well known for being a bloody bitch. LOL Great update! It has been SO LONG since I've read this story! I absolutely adore this fic. Please please please update again soon? I'm dying to find out just what Severus plans to do now? The fact of the matter is, Severus may be all for distancing himself....but he is still one possessive s.o.b. Hope to read more soon!
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beware: What follows is unabashed praise.
Subversa, you have written a dizzyingly good story. You have captured the characters and their reactions so well. I stayed up very late getting to the end of Chapter 12, and I wonder how and when you are going to reveal them to each other. Exquisite torture and don't know how much more I can take! It is a relief and a pleasure to read complex, angsty fic that is written so well. Looking forward to 13...
person marcia
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to the next chapter. I'm impatient however for snape and granger to just confess their feelings to eachother, though they would have to acknowledge their feelings to themselves 1st. Maybe she tells him in plain terms that she's come to care for him and after a bit he confesses the same. Though I imagine he'd do something stupid from the way you've written him like deny it to her face and say something mean.
person goofball
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* what a wonderful story so far! Thank you :o)
person Niami
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more...I
person nastygrl
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story! The lemons are fantastic, but so is the depth and the range of emotions. I can't wait to read more!
person Tenar10r
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved her outfit for the ball
person Queeny
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks. You gave me some ideas for my next chapter . I was running on dry !
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING! Please update soon. I'm addicted.