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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

person Niami
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God, wow, this must be the 5th time I've read and re-read this story. I love it so much and your details are perfect. How you write Snape is undeniabley sexy. Also the shoes....Please continue!
person Queeny
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh this story is getting better and better. Just love a jealous Severus!!! <3
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh, the plot thinkens AGAIN! I'm so happy to see your update and can hardly wait for the next!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEk!!
Oh my gosh! I loved this chapter. I really am a jerk, because I thrive on angsty stuff. But I really like the guy being the one suffering more so, and by the looks of it..... with Krum (whom I love) coming back into the picture... Severus will have a hard time in the upcoming chapters. Oh!!! I'm excited.

You know, I am not really sure this is love for angst is a healthy one.....
Oh well. I'll ponder that another day.

Anyway, please update realllly soon. I look forward to reading how it all plays out.

Yours in Eloquence
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person lilinda
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hum. Interesting chapter...
person DB1
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@13 wow great chapter update soon

*DB*
person marcia
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It would be Severus' own fault if he lost her. I got the feeling he wasn't planing on having someone else vy for her attentions.
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn, I was getting really into the story then bam...left me wondering whats going to happen between Victor and Hermione, and then what will Snape do?
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I hope Severus will be able to keep Hermione now that Viktor is at Hogwarts. I look forward to reading the next chapter soon.