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March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jeez of course Snape would never actually think that she's in trouble! He needs a good slap sometimes.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My, my what a way to leave it. I'm curious to see what unforgivable it is that was cast, by whom and who was hit. I'm guessing by Krum on Hermione and Imperious. Maybe that's too obvious though? Oh, a fun one would be by Hermione on herself a crucio. LOL. Blind the lust with pain.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great. I hope that Hermione is alright and that the unforgivable curse was not cast at her. I can't wait to read more.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow...crazy cliff hanger.
good update though.
good update though.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... That was such a brutal cliffhanger! I'm on the edge of my seat now, waiting for a resolution!
However, good chapter, brilliant job you've done at it, especially the tension and frustration Snape is suffering from.
However, good chapter, brilliant job you've done at it, especially the tension and frustration Snape is suffering from.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger!! AHHHH! Absolultely loved the chapter, now I am very very anxious for the next chapter.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Get. Back. Here. Right. NOW!! I cannot believe you left it like that! Oh my gosh, I don't think my poor little heart can keep taking all this. More more more PLEASE! What happened? Who cast an Unforgivable? I have my suspicions about who and which one they cast as well as on who, but I'm not completely sure, and I REALLY want you to update again so I know if I'm right! I need to know! lol (Like the dramatics?) Anyway, this was a really really great update and I honestly can't wait for more! Hope you update again soon!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hanging on my seat...I love this story so much. I'm itching for the next chapter! Brilliant, keep going!
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March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Subversa - there may be such a thing as too much controversy in a plot, too much drama, too many circumstances for the main characters to overcome in order to be together. If the house hadn't been asleep, I think I would have screamed (albeit uselessly) at my computer as I finished Chapter 14! What are you trying to do, kill me?
Excellent work, as usual.
Cheers! Mercy.
CB
Excellent work, as usual.
Cheers! Mercy.
CB