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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE LIKE YESTERDAY!!!!!!!!!!! i am in the middle of my exams and dying for some joy, i have hidden in the shadows reading this story for a while but have finally decided to come up and order you to update!! i love this story its one of my ultimate favs :). what does a girl have to do round here to get some serious in character snanger danger lovin!!! :P lol
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, what a cliffhanger! Great chapter!
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Morgen better watch it or Hermione will hex her good. I hope that Hermione won't be harmed while in the presense of Voldemort. Hopefully Severus will be able to protect her. I think Morgen was the one to cause Severus to be summoned with Hermione because she is jealous and wants him to get in trouble. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! Morgen that BITCH! I just want to.....grrrrrrr! Seriously fantastic update though! I can't wait for more, please please please update again soon!!
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I'm itching for more. Its like my crack. Lol. But I think that your story has been copied.
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Brilliant! Just Brilliant! I absolutely love this story! You captured Severus so well, and Hermione is... just fantastic. I am experiencing a similar situation in my own life (minus the magic, curses, dark army, etc) so I almost feel as though I can relate. Also there were a few lines is there that made me think, "Damn! Why didn't I think of putting it that way!" or "I wish I had put that in my story!" What brilliant writing! I just can't wait for you to update this story! Thank you for writing it!
person Queeny
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh interesting history. Looking forward to more.
person neelix
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This ia awesome...please update soon. I cant wait for the curse to be lifted so she can love him properly! Lovely....
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp!* Oh. My. Gosh. Well now....I was not expecting that. But I loved it. I seriously can't wait for more....so so so so frigging GOOD! Hope you can update again soon!!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I can't wait to read more.