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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm telling you, this is one of my favorite stories ever!! i love it! please update soon! what will happen?
person genna
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am not a fan of most school based stories. They make me feel creepy. Yours said she was 18 so I didn't feel as squicked out by the whole thing.

Besides the setting, this story has a BRILLIANT GRASP of the tenuous nature of relationships.
person Niami
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. You are brilliant!
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! ooo whats gonna happen, evilness, I love it can't wait for more
person Queeny
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ugh such an evil cliff hanger!!! Hurry up and update! I dont like sitting on the edge of my seat for prolonged periods of time!
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG BITCH! WHAT A BITCH!!! i hope something evil and nasty is going to happen to that morgan...she deserves nothing but the worst!! but wehey for severus standing up for hermione and escorting her to dinner, he may not have wanted to be all lovey in a room with his relatives but he still staked his claim on her and made it clear it was her he chose over morgan!!

but whats going to happen to hermione now??? he can't hurt her too severly can he...cos then the wizarding world will question snapes alliegence again...and the dark lord won't want to lose his spy. god i hope she's ok...and i hope morgan suffers!!!! *nods*...UPDATE SOON...DON'T LEAVE ME WAITING *begs* i am not a patient person lol!!

xxxx
person Natal
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wowza,

i love this story and what a cliff hanger!!

The concept is new, the writing is ace, the smut is yummy to say the least and i really can't wait for the next update so please, please, please get writing again!!

Luvvin it!!

ciao, Scribe
person mahsaff
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely, lovely, lovely story. I'm only about halfway done, but I wanted to review and thank you for the enjoyment I've had from it so far. Oh, and to tell you that I'm disappointed that one of Madam Prince's grandsons isn't named 'Ringo' LOL
person nmos
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this update was so good.
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.