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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Snape certainly saved the day on that one eh? And Morgen is SO screwed! If I were Voldemort, I'd cast that spell on her seeing as how I would now be out a....well, a sex slave basically. That'd really show her huh? I don't know what it is about Morgen that brings out the vindictiveness in me...lol! Great update, really really good. I can't wait for more!
person Queeny
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOSH thats a terrible cliff hanger! Hurry up and fix it! !!
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can we just kill off this Morgen? She is beyond evil and deserves to be smacked down.
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's a decision no one would want to make! This story has me hooked!

Hey, on which other archives is this story listed? I wonder if I might ask you some questions about online publication? ink.stainedwretch@yahoo.com
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ewwww petrigrew or dolohov...nasty on soooo many levels *shudders*...i think i'd prefer madness. update soon i'm dying to know what happens and how severus gets them out of this one...or maybe hermione comes up with a plan and instigates it without severus knowing...hmmmmm. i love this story!! morgan so needs her come uppance....hermione needs to slap the bitch n then set her on fire or something!!!! evil whore!!! hehe laughed when severus turned her down...that has so gotta sting...willing to risk his life and do anything but marry her...and the 'another mans leftovers' that had gotta hurt!!! hehe.

you've written this amazingly and they are so in character...looking forward to the next chappie...please don't leave me waiting too long!!!

scarlett

schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ack! ew wormtail, that is tooo gross to even contemplate. sevvie's in a quandry, i wonder how he'll get out of this.
person neelix
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness... what a choice to make. Poor Sevrus... and that Morgen!! What a cow!!! Love this, glad to know we will get regular updates now.
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!! Poor Hermione!! And poor Sev. The thought of her being compelled to fuck Wormtail is almost enough to make me sick
Please update soon, I need to know what happens next.
Ooh I would so Avada that Morgen bitch into next week!! Grrrrrrr!!!!
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a brilliant author! This scene is just laced with complex thoughts and banter. I love it so much! Please continue quickly! The suspense is incredible!
person CB13
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mercy. How's our boy gonna get out of this one??? If you're American and old enough to have ever watched the (original) Dukes of Hazzard (please don't think less of me, I was 10), you'll recognize the cliffhanger image in my mind of the General Lee, hanging in mid-air over an impossible-looking leap - WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT????

Except I always knew them Duke boys would win in the end, and this time, I'm not too sure about good ole' Severus.

Cheers

CB