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for The Love You Take

by Subversa

person Shellnet
schedule June 13, 2019 at 12:00 AM

 Great ending but could use  an epilogue maby with the wedding and kids

schedule January 3, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Amazing story!

person kelsey
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story I didn't want it to end this is the second time I have read it and it was just as good you write so beautifully thanks for writing a great story
schedule May 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM

I truly enjoyed the story you've woven here, and I must say that one of the marks of truly great writing, in my opinion, is the ability to know when the drama has reached that point of completely becoming something darker than intended, and to turn it around. You did it all beautifully, with one line:

schedule February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. Love this take on it. Thank you for sharing!
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! Your writing style is just beautiful
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my dear, I quite loved this story. Loved it. I can see where you first thought it was a PWP, but I also got quite caught up in Severus' quiet determination to control his emotions (is there any reason that I keep thinking of Spock off of Star Trek??? LOL) and his dark anguish upon realizing that he can not. Severus truly emobodies everything I've come to want from him in your stories. Loved it!
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. One of the best stories I have ever read. Absolutely fabulous.
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY WAS 2 FUCKING GOOD. I REALLY LOVE IT
AND ALL I WISH IS THAT YOU KEEP WRITING SS/HG
STORIES FOR A REALLY LONG TIME. THANKS FOR A
WONDERFUL STORY... DAY79
person Olwen
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just found the bookmark I had set for this story. I'm so glad you saw it all the way through. Titania Prince is a force to be reckoned with and I'm glad to have met her. I hope you have more planed for the future. You have a lovely writing style.