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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

person kai!
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry! god Sev! you...you killed himoff!!!

seriously sitting here balling!!!!1!!!

awesome story even if im pissed at you for killimg Sev!
person Dirty_darella
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey guys! Sorry it's been so long since I've reviewed. I disappeared from the internet when I had to pick up work. XD


Anyway, this story, as always, is so brilliant! You guys write so well, and I've missed catching up on these. I actually went back and read most of it from the beginning again so everything would be fresh in my mind. :D


Oh no, snape! I'm really interested to see where this portrait bit will go... :)

-Dirty_d
person Sangrebloom
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just so you both know, I found this story three days ago, and have obessed reading every chapter I could in a sitting just to finish it!
I loved every twist! I loved every turn! In a way I was almost relieved that you didn't bring Severus back for a Fourth run at life. I thought his death in the end was not only brave, but something he actually would of done. I felt he had to watch so many die, because he couldn't save them for the idea of the 'greater good' that saving Ginny would make him seem nobler. I actually have always really disliked Ginny, In the books I thought she was there as an after thought of 'oh yes! he needs a love interest' Your story actually made me come to LIKE Ginny. I may not start to read any Ginny/Harry stories, but you've actually made her someone I can read about and not roll my eyes.
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've spent about the last week reading this story from the beginning for the first time and I have loved pretty much every minute of it! Yes, like others said before me, I wished that the Snarry would have started sooner, but everything was so well written and /believable/, that it was fine! Soooo sad when Sev was killed again, but a painting is simply brill! I don't think I've seen anyone write that before and I just can't wait to see where it goes from there.
Keep up the great work!
person Darkless
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...a portrait. You know, I've often agreed with others who've thought that a living portrait can be a comfort to those left behind, allowing for a little closure...but to a lover? I'm not so sure. More like a subtle form of torture in that case. I think that would be too soon for a grieving Harry.

Ah *shivver* the wonderus angst! Thank you sooo much!
person cravedom
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, I had really hoped he would not be on that portrait. He is really dead.

Can you imagine that? How would you feel if your wife gifted you an animated portrait of your dead lover? How will Severus feel? I would imagine they would get used to it in time but it is going to be a shock. I just know there is going to be more crying comming up.

Ok, we still have to deal with dear Luciud. Even though he is a sexy beast we must punish him. Frankly he just needs to die, I don't think Draco would miss him much. Yes I think a little revenge would make us feel better...

person Rylan
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Slightly confuzzled at this point... Severus alive? You do like to yank our chains, don't you?

And Harry's going to be absolutely tortured by the painting.

I've stopped trying to guess what you'll do next.
schedule May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely bit with James sleeping. I could really picture it. I liked how Snape came to consciousness in the Headmaster's office and also that Ginny thought to commission a picture of Snape. I know Harry will appreciate it, even if Ginny can't fathom the depth of his appreciation.

Thanks for giving us another chapter.

T
person amanda
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, what an amazing story, truly one of the best ive read please keep going i want to know more
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful I just can't believe you killed Severus. I hope Lucius really gets what is coming to him soon. Please update soon.