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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

person Kat9jr
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I just found this story a few days ago, how i managed to miss it in my countless searches for snarry mpreg fics is beyond me. I've never read a story that had me so enticed, confused and at times angry and yet still love it. I've had to take deep calming breaths and wipe the tears from my eyes during the last few chapters. I'm not a Harry/Ginny fan at all and usually i find myself loathing Ginny a a character in general however you have me liking her (Which is a new and strange phenomenon). I'm hoping I'll continue to like her character as the story continues. I enjoyed the way you kept Severus in the story even after he died. I hadn't considered the idea of a portrait, i figured he would come back as a ghost. Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to reading more.

With much Encouragement,

Kat9jr
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've just spend the last 2 days reading this fantastic story.

I can't express how much I've enjoyed this so far.... I am truly a Harry/Severus or Harry/Draco shipper, but the relationship between Harry/Ginny is wonderful (much better than in the books IMO) and it never made me cringe ones (unlike in the books). However I love the way the relationship with Severus developed, wonderful.

If I could get my hands on Lucius Malfoy now he would be so dead!

I understand why Severus had to die, but I think my heart broke a little at Harry's and Ginny's grief over Severus, those chapters were truly amazing and the way Harry railed at Dumbledore was so heart wrenching.

Another person I would love to thump is Ron, honestly how insensitive can that boy (yes boy) be and then to accuse his own wife of choosing Severus over Fred, honestly.

I was not suprised though to learn that Albus was/will be Harry's & Severus' child, as it should be. I just hope you have a way to make it right with Ginny, cause Harry is gonna need her and I think she needs Harry regardless of what she might say at the moment.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dear God. Think I just went through an entire box of tissues.

*waves* I've sat and read through all of the chapters for the first time over the last few days. What a wonderful piece of work you have going here! Even if it has thrown me up and down like a yoyo. Especially that last chapter *sniffle* No, screw sniffling. *wails*... *loudly*

Before it all got desperately sad, the sex was so hot I needed a fan. It really was so hot, but touching at the same time (y'know, even when they thought they were just going at it like rabbits.)

And then you went and... *sniff* *lower lip wobbles* And now he's... *blows nose*

Not often i'm made speechless and rendered so scared for the characters in a fic. So can I please be added to your update list, so I can continue to be shut up. I think my OH appreciates the quiet ;) starstruckwriter1986@googlemail.com xx
person qwerty
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
!!!
Despite this story not being the typical Snarry fic, I do enjoy it very much!
Keep going!
person PantherRain
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG Harry's pregnant! I couldn't help but smile when I noticed! I mean, I feel bad for them, but still... Strangely, I know how he feels a little...
person anon
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Love it.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD Oh Harry. It amuses me so that you got yourself knocked up. *giggles*

What a turn of events! I can't wait to see what happens next!
person Cassandra
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-screams- hurry and UPDATE AGAIN PLEASE. Quit with them them in cliffhangers please. lol. I LOVE IT Great story can't wait for the next.
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Though I'm still on Ginny's side in this, I can't help but feel sorry for Harry too. It's not fair that all he had dreamed of is going to be ripped from him, leaving him alone with a small infant to raise. Your writing for all the characters that are involved is spot on. Ginny, with her betrayal and her reaction to it, is classic Ginny. Harry's guilt and Severus' mixed feelings all come through. Thanks for sharing this chapter with us.

Oh, and yeah, you know I want to received update alerts.
person akahimena
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg Poor Harry. I hope he intends to keep the child because the way he spoke of him at the end it sounded a bit scary. I wish that Sev could come back and be with Harry ::sobs:: I know I know it can't happen. I wonder what Ginny will do? I hope that she doesn't tell the rest of the Weasley's it's so private but knowing her she will. I dunno if she will stay with Harry but hopefully she doesn't take away their other child. Please update soon I wanna know what is going to happen. So many questions to be answered! ^_^