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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

person cravedom
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Goodness! I just read the last three chapters and found myself crying at least twice.
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two words out of my mouth after reading the last chapter: "God Dammit!" This is why I do NOT read WIP *crys*.

Other then that, I'm loving this so far. I am a bit worried about the Harry/Ginny and Harry thinking that Severus only likes him because of his mother (when the time hopefully comes). I no that the Harry/Ginny is important to keep this in character and close to cannon, but I really really despise Harry/Ginny. I almost stopped reading Harry Potter because of JK pairing them together. I'm only happy that it didn't have to much of them in the last book.

ANYWAYS you guys are doing a great job in writing this. And I really truly hope you update soon...and hopefully a long long chapter. I hate waiting, and I hate WIP...My memory is so bad that its so hard for me to keep reading them (oh could you add me to your list for updates? please! silverphoenix69@gmail.com) Umm what else? I think thats it for now. Update soon? *puppy eyes*
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
simply wonderful!
I must be fucking blind not to notice that fic before. bangs her head againt a wall.. LOL
Wonderful! I believe this is exactly what book n8 would have looked like, had Severus made it.
Snape is SO in character, that it actually amazes me. Are you JKR or smth? Simply breathtaking.
Ginny- well, I hate her, sorry. I have hated her since book 1 and I hate her after book 7, I hate her everywhere. Blah, she just pisses me off. I don't kow why. LOL, so I won't be reviewig HER here, ok?
Harry- Gryffindor, what can you say. It is really funny how you portray him sometimes, makes me laugh!
The only thing I don't get- I admit that I am dumb sometimes-is this SLASH Severus/Harry or Harry/Ginny with Severus mentor? I just don't get it here. Care to explain, please?
P.S please email me when the update is ready, ok?
person Jan
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So There! Indeed.

I only hope that Harry's little stunt to help and free Severus doesn't backfire. Severus truly doesn't deserve to be sentence to Azkaban.

Please update chapter 18 soon. ^_^
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love this story so far, so I'd love to know when you have updated.
magik-spell@hotmail.com
person liza
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just thought i'd take the time to let you know that i have unexpectantly fallen comepletely in love with this story. i have no idea where it's going but i love it. i like that ginny and harry are atill... ginny and harry. lol. the pair of them are so endearing. i mean, it's first love at it's finest even if it doesn't last, it's adorable to watch. the progression of harry and severus' friendship is well done. you're taking your time which i respect and the story just feels... natural i guess. looking forward to more.
person Jan
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy, oh so happy!!! I finally found it AGAIN! :D

Really, I wish this site had an add to favorite list, so I could keep track of all the stories and authors I love reading of.

Hope I see the next time you update, so please update chapter 16 soon. ^_^

Oh! And I love the way Severus is slowly but surly opening up to Harry and finally seeing him for him and not James. Though I don't like the way Harry and Ginny are always kissing when their together. (Never really liked her, I saw her as a weak character, through out the books and the movies.)^_~
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really glad to have found this fic. It's been refreshing to read something so well written. I'll do my best to keep an eye out for updates. Keep up the fabulous work!
person cravedom
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is going so well. I like that you have not rushed. Sometimes we (the readers) like to complain that things are slow but it does take time to develop a story. So, do ignore our whining and keep doing what you are doing.
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far! I love the way you have resurrected Snape and put Harry into the position of taking care of him. I look forward to how they will sort through their difeerences, and of course any romance, sex, or violence that happens along the way. I was just kidding about the violence :) Thanks for this story. Happy New Year to you and yours.