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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

person demerious
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Setting aside the clump of soggy-tear-soaked mansize tesco tissues, I'll start by saying that I very much love "All That You Leave Behind" as a work of fiction written on the adored Snarry ship and behind-the-possible-scenes insight into life between The Epilogue and Final Chapter of DH.

It's well written and thought out (plotwise, grammar, spelling, all that jazz that makes up a good book) and really I can't comment enough on how diligently you've worked on this since I only just discovered this iridescent gem of LOVE-LIFE-and-HEARTACHE. I wait eagerly for what happens next and really...I just love this story; it's painful, yes, but there are all these undertones of hope and wilfulness and god I hope Harry finds his happy ending...

Oh there's so much I want to say -all throughout reading since last night, I've wanted to pause to write a comment in response to yours and the story insofar but then couldnt wait to read on and see what happened next! Most importantly and wonderfully; Harry and Severus and Everyone are incredibly true to form which makes Harry and Severus' love (and loss) all the more...real.

Please, if you're still continuing with this fic, I'd love to be added to your update alert list (demerious at hotmail.com). And if not, it's been such a wonderful ride that I can only thank you for your efforts in sharing this story with us readers.

=) eiri.
person Aki WildQueen
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your story is amazing!
I just started reading it and just couldn't stop! In less than a day, I finished everything up to the latest chapter and I can't wait for more.
I saw that you have an alert list. Would it be possible for me to be put on that list? I really want to read more!
Thank you!
P.S. Mr. Bunny loved this story a lot too and would like to say that Aki will email you to give you her email.
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person talonora
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
uh oh cat is out of the bag!! big time!! awesome chapter!! I love the story keeper going!! :)
person Luxard
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a wonderful story so far! I don't normally like m-preg, but for this I'll totally make an exception for. I love it and I can't think of anything that could make it better. Great Job!
person Christina
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello ladies, hope I'm not too late to make sure I'm added to the update list, I missed these until I checked my WIP links yesterday, and I'd love to read them hot off the press! christinalovestrees@gmail.com

Ok, I got to read chapter 73-76 in one go, and first I gotta tell you, the entire 'Harry's pregnant'- so a surprise! It's been so long since I read the story info page that I'd forgotten the mpreg part, and it was a total shocker, my mouth totally hanging open, and THANK YOU GOD the next chapter was up or I might not have made it. ;}

Great twist here and you've really made the story fit together *perfectly* - "How. Could. You?!" she said, and he knew she knew. - yep, the jig's up, and now the sh*t's hitting the fan. I CANNOT WAIT to see where you take it now. *cracks whip* Well, where's 77? *taps foot* I'm waiting! :D :D :D

The portrait- I kinda anticipated that one, it's just something your Ginny would do. Ron getting pissy at Christmas dinner- kinda understandable, but I'm glad that even George told him to chill out. Harry with his 'sympathy pains', when I came back and re-read that part I had to smirk at the irony. And the end, with Harry talking with Severus, oh-ho how my heart twisted for them. It's an awful feeling when you've done something wrong and you feel so guilty, there's so many ways this situation can work out, depending alot on Ginny of course. (And I'm kinda with Harry here, I'd like some details on the whole 'pregnant man thing'. [I really love to hear authors reasoning for mpregs] I believe a visit to Hermione is coming up!) What's so weird to me is I'm really hurting for Ginny too, you've made her into a beautiful character and I'm ready to see how she handles this.

Great, great writing here, ladies, thank you so much for the beautiful words, Christina
person Ryanne
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Could i be added to the update list for this story.

Thanks

Ryanne_Wilson@yahoo.co.uk
person Ryanne
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just wanted to say, I love this story. I read it all weekend long, even while at work.
I hardly ever write reviews because there is little work out there that stirs any emotion in me.

You ladies have out done yourselves.

I've been bouncing around like an erratic teen suffering from wild mood swings all weekend long, my reactions have been so visceral that one of my roommates as just asked for the url to the story, because they have never seen me this obsessed about a story in a long time, so it clearly must be brilliant.

Thanks for sharing your brilliant work. I look forward to reading more...

Well, I was literally yelling "no no no...not here not now...where's the rest...you can't leave me here" as i read the last chapter, declaring hexes on you both for leaving me in this state.

LOL

Thanks for the ride.

I really appreciate a good read


Ryanne

person Tarquin Furie
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanted to let you know that yes I would like to stay on the update alert mailing list. And this last chapter was so good. I feel equally bad for Harry and Ginny. I wish someone was a round to explain things to Harry and help him out. I wonder if he would go to Hermione, or if he would tell her. Can't wait for the next one!!!
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I just discovered this story on AFF and spent practically all day reading it. I've been laughing and sobbing (mostly sobbing) for the last several hours which means I'm definitely in love with this fic! I'm not sure I can actually write a good, much less coherent, review because I'm so broken up over the last several chapters. It's weird because I don't usually like Ginny/Harry fics, but I've fallen for all three characters in this story, and I'm desperate to find out what happens. I hope you update soon and definitely continue writing because this fic was well worth the several hours spent in front of desk!
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O_O I love this. I want to cry and laugh...Poor Harry and Severus! EVEN poor Ginny...I can't stand her, but in this story, you've written her part so well, I can't help but like her as well!