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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter; I love the emotional interplay between Harry and Severus. Can't wait for the romantic climax, no pun intended. Thanks for a great read so far; I look forward to the next chapter.
~Vero
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MAN!!! The ending had me rolling!!! Perfect chspter!!!!
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gees, women! Finally an update! LOL. I loved it. Even more and more I enjoy reading about Severus and Harry's relationship. Yep, now they do look like Severitus, but I believe you told many times that this is Snarry actually. so I won't ask again. LOL..Very good chapter. Harry is soo sweet with Severus.

Loved it!
Serpie
person Darkless
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.o? Page reversed itself...hmm. Well, I'll try to review again.

Oooh, nasty cliffy! You must not leave us hanging for too long. Please add me to your alert list: darklessvasion at hotmail. com

I'd really like to see this story through it's completion. Very nicely written.
person cravedom
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! Man what a place to stop! I will be eagerly waiting.
person Darkless
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great, great GREAT! I have been very impressed with the quality of this story and am determined to follow as it continues (in spite of the het with Ginny - LoL) so please keep writing. You may also notify me about new chapters, I would appreciate it. Thank you. darklessvasion@hotmail.com
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How exactly does the Harry/Ginny romance inplode?

They find out how stresful it is to try to get married at that young of an age, with no settled arangements of house, money, job, etc?
The Weasley's think they are too young to get married?
They find about about the home run in the house while the parents were out?
Does she get knocked up?

Otherwise... You're actually validating the relationship... You bring up and solve the issues a lot of people had problems with the canon pairing. You have them show each other that they do love the other...

And this seems sevitus then anything.

You're putting Snape in the phantom father role for Harry...

How does this really fall into Snarry?
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Muhahahah!!!
Finally Harry understands his mistakes!
I just loved the way you described the characters here, especially the Ministry.Hate them
You made me DROOL WITH RELIEF- it will be HARYY/SEVERUS, not HARRY/I-hate-moronic-Ginny !!1 YAY!
BTW, THANK you so much for dedicating the chappy to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! LOL

hmm...I thought you could see my email, since I have an account.Ok, anyway, please send me the updates to
Serpensotia@gmail.com ( who would have guessed, righ LOL )

SUPERB STORY, please update asap! I want to see Ginny's face when Harry admits that he is in love WITH SEVERUS
muhahahahahaha!!!
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story, keep writing!
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I myself am also not a Harry/Ginny fan, but I admire the way that you looked past that and didn't make Ginny petty, or secretly evil, or a hero groupie. I also like the way that you have balanced a growing respect for Harry with his normal dry wit when writing Severus's character. I would really like to keep up with this story. If there is a mailing list, I would like to be added. My email is girlgunslinger@hotmail.com.
Thank you,
Lunatic with a Hero Complex