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I like Harry's thoughts on Dumbledore and how he used both of them. It did seem like Dumbledore used Snape up and just discarded him after he was through. Ginny saying Harry was her family is sweet. I really like her fiery temperment. Good job.

You keep putting in teaser scenarios to get me all excited, and then it is something completely different. I keep grabbing the hair by my temples and going, "GAAHH!" in exasperation.

And would you please add me to the update list? Thankies.

you. are. EVIL!! Wicked, wicked wenches! Although I must say that I'm on to you two - as soon as you started referring to the 2nd character as 'other', I figured it had to be Ginny instead of our delicious Severus. Queens of "Angst" ?? Oh yeah, but not just angst for the characters, ya'll must truly get off on torturing your devoted readers! *hmph!*

As usual, very well written, and continues to be extremely addictive. Obviously I'm becoming a masochist, because I keep coming back for more, and accepting that Snarry isn't going to happen for at least four or five more chapters. Although *narrows eyes suspiciously* you wicked women may decide to string us along for ten torturous chappies before providing satisfaction for us. Us??!! What about Harry??!! What about Snape??!! Arghh! *witholding chocolate* Those poor boyz. I wonder if I can talk them into visiting my computer for a while . . . *checks the stock of lube* Hmmm.

Ta

It's so odd for me to read het now, as I've been going on mostly slash for, well, a long time. It was terrifically written, though. Almost made me miss it...

As for this whole "natural progression" thing; I love that there's a slow build up and I love your Ginny. I hate the Ginny-bashing stories (and I hope I'm not insulting anything that's already been written). What she said about what it's like to be possessed and filled, I have a story that I'm working on with a friend that says the same thing. Of course, it's chock full of OCs and Harry's sleeping with Draco on the side (Ginny knows and is cool). My point? I can't tell if that's the way you're going to go, where Ginny accepts a relationship between Harry and Snape or if you're going to kill her off (which would actually make me sad, but is still better than her being evil).

Thank you for adding me to the update list!!

P.S. On a side note, the collaborative story that my friend and I are working on is done in gmail docs. That way we can **shocked gasp** work on it while at work without having to install aim or other such messenger services. Just thought I'd share. I hope someone finds your story and does some artwork for it. That would be awesome!!

Cheers and thanks for the update!

I think Harry is being a little too hard on himself. Dumbledore really put him up to a lot of his misadventures, whether Harry knew it or not. Ginny is going to be a calming presence for Harry. Ron's reaction was classic Ron. He doesn't think before he speaks and is always out to get Slytherins. Idiot.

God I HATE Rita Skeeter. You write that evil b-- ah, witch well. She should have died in the war along with Umbridge. Now, since you left the evil cliffie at the end of the last chapter, I have to cut this review short and read the next chapter. Darn you and your good storytelling.

Hey guys! I really like to say that I love this story! I know I can be bad at reviewing, but I wanted to review because your story is really awesome and it would suck if you thought it wasn't. I did however feel like that the comment you made was a bit overboard. Begging for reviews is one thing, but scolding people for not reviewing? That's a little too much. I think people will feel more harrased than inspired to review.

Go Hermione! And Go Harry more! That was well written, the flow was good and fast-paced. Pomfrey and her interference was a good tension reliever.

I am really hoping for that light at the end of the tunnel, the silver lining so to speak, and as long as in my heart I can for a time believe that happiness might come, I can convince myself that I am not quite as broken up over these events as I find myself being. Great story, don't break my heart.

wow! thanks for updating again so soon! this chapter was really hot! lol ^_~ I'm really glad harry's thinking about snape that way at last! What's going to happen with ginny and james though... thanks again for updating so soon! i really appreciate it!