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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry
person arynwy
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, very kind of you to give us 3 in one day! I really like Severus here. So, do we get a three-some out of this in the end??? I'm really feeling for Ginny at this point. She has been extremely understanding up to this point.
person Jan
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 42 soon ^_^
person She Who Must Be Obeyed
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely devastated/ enthusiastic/ excited/ sad/ guilty and a whole bunch of other emotions all at the same time! I have only just discovered your story and have read it straight through (my computer chair is SO not comfortable enough to spend this many hours in!)

I think it might be the fact that it is now 2am and I only got about 4 hours sleep last night but I am slightly over excited (OK v big understatement but my brain is also starting to shut down from lack of sleep) about the pure brilliance of this story. I am also feeling extremely guilty that I have never reviewed before when you obviously needed a bit of a boost at times. I feel the need to beg forgiveness even though I didn't start reading your story until today (well technically yesterday but as I havn't gone to bed yet I'm not sure which counts?)

I love this story! The whole Ginny/Harry element makes it all the more realistic and I love the way that you made Sev so snarky and true to form at the start. It has made the story all the more believable. We all love a bit of Snarry goodness (or naughtiness) and this has the makings of a brilliant Snarry saga. I love the fact that it is going to be an epic because once I get into a story this much, I get very attatched and don't want it to end.

My brain is not producing enough higher level function to discuss the story in any coherent way (can you tell from the ramblingness of my review so far?) but I promise to be a bit less... well, wierd really ... in my next review. Anywayz, keep up the fantasmagorical (my Dad's favourite word!) writing, can't wait for the next chapter!
person Ladynight
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Severus and Harry are moving forword in their relationship, however, I feel terrible for Ginny. Infidelity sucks so much.
person Rylan
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for THREE WHOLE CHAPTERS! Wow! And not just that there were three of them - your usual high quality was not sacrificed for quantity. *applause*

I really liked that Severus wasn't so drunk that he freaked over Lily's appearance, that he knew exactly what was going on - and that he was brave enough to challenge Harry's reasons for doing such a silly thing. Bravo for Harry, too, for admitting his real reasons to Severus *more applause*

*puzzled expression* Just how big was that bottle of firewhiskey? I don't know anyone who would be coherent after downing half a bottle of whiskey, much less being capable of having an intelligent conversation, running around the woods, or snogging anyone senseless . . . maybe I hang with the wrong crowd . . .

Ta
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8:

"He knew he should go to Eeylop
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thats not fair! (sighs)
person Dragonfly7
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Now when is Ginny coming home? And will she catch them?
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11:

Wow, that's all I can say. Wow.

Chapter 12:

I like your Ginny. She's as fiery and down to earth as cannon Ginny, but a little more understanding.