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poor Ginny... but yay! hot smut ahead! thanks again for updating so quickly! you guys make me feel guilty about how slow i am to update.. ^_^"" oh well! write fast please!

My god but you two are amazing. That can't have been easy, assuming that not all three were pre-written. Please know that I (and everyone else following this story) are greatly appreciative of how many hours of your free time were put into this. And please pass along my thanks to whatever family you have that has allowed you the time to do this as well, be they human or pet. I can't wait for the next installment. Wonderfully laid out and beautifully written, you've got me perched on the edge of your seat.

Thank you for not making Ginny wretched (thus far)!!

I am in total agreement with Severus' idea of sexuality and love and how it shouldn't be defined as heterosexual, homosexual or bisexual. It's simply sexual and sensual and people should embrace it. The world would be a better place if it had a few less labels in, especially the kind that separate instead of unite!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you! This has brightened up my day immensely.

Ok I've had a good nights sleep and a bit more coherent today! Sorry for the inane (or should that be insane?) babbling last night. In case you didn't get my gist, I think that you are a writing duo extraordinaire and have serious talent!

The whole build up to this point has been fantastic and I am really excited to see how you are going to move the plot along. Obviously if you are staying true to cannon then Harry and Ginny will need to stay together for a few more years as they only have James so far (unless of course this is going to take an Mpreg slant soon?) But do Harry and Sev continue to sneak around when Ginny is away? Does Harry confess all and they live together in a harmony with Harry alternating beds on specific days? Does Ginny walk in and find them, have a screaming fit, run out of the house and get killed by a car? (I stole the last plot take from another fic I have read recently called Sins of the Father)

There are so many different ways that this could go and I am having to restrain myself from demanding that you reveal it all NOW! because, well, a) demanding things is very bad manners and I was brought up better than that, b) even if I did demand I know you wouldn't tell me and c) I am really enjoying the journey and don't actually want to know how it all works out in the end because that would mean the story was over and I don't want that to happen for a very long time yet!

I can feel myself starting to ramble again so will sign off now as it is nearly midnight again and I really do have to go to bed soon. Sending 'muse'ful thoughts your way to encourage and inspire you to keep writing. Oh, and a big slice of Carrot cake 'cos I make the best Carrot cake in the known universe!

Harry's an ass...Severus is a manipulative ass and I never thought I'd say this...but poor Ginny, hope she thrashs them good when she finds out.

hmm, i wish that ginny was dead..is that wrong? oh, well she is a fictional character so i don't think so! LOL love the chapters

Oh man! At least he did not throw up on him.

Severus was so understanding of Harry

ch41: XD lolz poor sev wonder if harry will remember any of this in the morning...

-chapter 38-

Oooh, what's Harry going to do?!?!
You guys are the champs when it comes to cliffies. XD
Poor Harry, when are you going to wake up and realize it's not Lily but you that Sev wants? Hopefully soon!

Great chapter as always. ^_^

no! don't make their first time be straight sex! >_< sheesh! harry's thick for thinking Severus is still into his long dead mum! lol but great writing and thank you for updating so soon! ^^

thank you for updating so quickly! that was HOT! lol thanks for not making snape do anything to Lily's body. That would've ruined everything. lol Harry's gonna have such a hang over... ^_~