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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off, booo Lucius Malfoy.
But yay for some good old Harry/Snape action! *growl*

I'm so amazed by how complex the story is becoming, drawing me more and more into it with the excellent writing.

I can't wait to find out what happens next. :D
person Rylan
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm running out of different ways to tell you how fabulous you are.

I've resigned myself to the fact that you call this an "epic" for a reason. I bow to the plot-twisting deviousness of your imaginations. I whimper in frustration along with the boyz. Yes, yes, I know, you are the Queens of ANGST. I get it. I surrender. *submissively offers leash and waits quietly for next installment*

Ta
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nooo!! So close! *snicker*

Sorry, woulda reviewed the last chapters but I just read them as well. ^^; Computer issues.

I agree with Sevvy. Harry's capable of an immense amount of love, and he should definitely share all around. *nods*
person Lili A.
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am utterly amazed at the consistancy with which Harry and Severus' feelings progress throughout the chapters and the manner in which they are handled. It truly is refreshing to see how the two of you handle the matter of Harry being in love with two very different people and the conflict within him to express his love for Severus. The two of you have managed not to fall into the common trap of "well, they've expressed their feelings so they should immediately jump into bed" and it makes the emotional build up of each chapter so much greater. Also, will we see more of Lucius' plotting and other characters?

Lili
person Fairner
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lolz interruptions interruptions XD however i don't know why but i think the only reason why the medical student was caught as due to Malfoy...
person Dragonfly7
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Part of my problem with leaving reviews is that I don't really know how to leave a good one. Most of the time my brain just goes, "Hey, that was cool" or something of a similar nature. If I'm going to leave a review, I'd like to have more to say than, "OMG that was great! Please update soon!" like many other reviews I see. If something is glaringly incorrect or bothering me, I'll point it out. The rest of the time, I don't usually know what to say.
I suppose I can give it a try for this chapter: If Lucius Malfoy is plotting something that won't have results for another six months, does that mean you're going to continue to slowly torture me for the next few chapters while I wait to find out when and how Ginny will react to this relationship, or will there be a time jump in there somewhere? It's a good torture, though. It's like waiting for one's Christmas presents.
person SamHill
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Snape!! Someone really needs to invent a spell that literally *zaps* people when their fire-call is interrupting "very important things"!!

Thank you again for such quick updates!!
person Ladynight
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooo....Lucius(Sp?) is an evil,evil man. Severus and Harry just keep digging themselves deeper and deeper.
person Fairner
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ch 43 - o.O oo boy lolz what's going to happen now XD
person kalaway
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm glad you didn't have Lily!Harry/Snape cause that's slightly creepy. You'll probably make Harry not remember anything in the morning though *grr* living up to your name too much I think, lol.