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Aww, party's over already?
But the smex! Yay for more of it! (I'm always cheering for sex, lol, I dunno if that's healthy... but then again I suppose the craziness comes with the 'fangirl' territory...)

This chapter was hot and well written! I just feel bad for... well everyone I suppose. It's a shame that Harry had such little time with Severus, I do hope he gets more and soon. (And more sex!)

So... Yeah. I just read this and I'm here. At work. And I would much rather *not* be here, because that was... delicious. Sinfully so. And you guys should just be ashamed of yourselves for not choosing to do a PWP because, um... yeah. But yes, I look forward to when Harry finally tells Ginny (I can *almost* see her already knowing. Women can be like that; knowing what someone else needs even before they do). And you're making me hate Lucius even though he's so pretty... (It's a sickness, I know. But not only do I love Jason Isaacs, I love artist Heather's (aka Makani) idea of what he looks like: http:// acciobrain . ligermagic . com/gen . php (yes, just take out all the spaces).

You guys are wonderful and I absolutely love this story. Now, back to writing my own...

The speed at which you two finish these chapters is astonishing.

Aaaaaaaaw... I loved this chapter! It was sexy and sweet all at the same time. I want to give Sev a great big hug after what he said to Harry about not splitting up his family.

I am a little perturbed though, the last few chapters have been beautiful, sexy and sweet and I have loved all of them. I can't, however, help but think that the other shoe is going to drop soon and that there is a tidal wave of angst, strife, pain and heartache around the next corner. Probably caused by the lovely Luc and his meddlesome minions.

I am loving the sunshine whilst it lasts though and am making the most of all the smutty goodness that you have provided. I await the next chapter with slight trepidation but lots of enthusiasm.

That was one of your sweetest chapter!!!

Please update chapter 50 soon ^_^

Another three chapters, full of Snarry goodness. Lovely, that. Ta, much.

- Chapter 45 and 46 -

Yay, the long awaited smut! Hmm....
Well, they certainly seemed to enjoy it, didn't they? :D

Now that they've given into some of that built up carnal desires, maybe they'll start working on their emotional ones. *crosses fingers*

Excellent as always!

At last, the 'hot monkey sex' has started! Ok perhaps not 'hot monkey' quite yet but at least 'tepid tortoise'.

I can see that all of my worst fears have been confirmed... Lucius is the man behind all the trouble. It looks like the only redeeming feature he has got is his yummyness. Sigh.

I've had to start writing my own Harry/Lucius story now 'cos I've read all of the ones on the net several times over. I've done about 800 words in three days. I may be here for some time...

I really don't know how you two manage to write so much good quality work in so little time. Especially with you living in different countries and time zones. Hats off to you both and all hail to the masters! Btw I mean acclaim and praise, I'm not wishing bad weather on you! Although... if you can't go outside then you would have to stay in and write more. Hmmm... it has possibilities!

Anyway enough of my ramble. On to the next chapter!

Okay I think this chapter has moved a leap or two closer to 'hot monkey'. Perhaps 'raging rhino'?

Btw, not criticising your writing of the scenes; they just haven't quite got to the full-on and kinkyness required for the 'hot monkey' appellation yet but, fingers crossed, I'm sure that will arrive in due course when Harry 'n' Sev get to that point in their relationship! They will get to that point in their relationship right? You've dashed all my hopes about Luc, please tell me that Harry 'n' Sev do get to the 'hot monkey' stage... please?

Not sure what else to write about this chapter really, the sex was h o t but it would be a tad wierd for me to talk about my favourite bits.

I did love the bracelet that Harry got for Ginny though. I want one! I want an extra function on mine though, one that will get me straight to work so I can have an extra 30min in bed in the morning instead of driving!

Anyway, very late again, must go to bed before I write more random drivel and people call the men in white coats! See last review about how fab I think you both are. Until next time!

Yummy yummy yummy!!!

Please update chapter 49 soon ^_^