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Wonderful story!

I absolutely love it!

And I'm so curious as to how things between Harry and Ginny will be resolved! After all, the prologue did said 'Harry's three children' and I don't think it very plausible for Harry to end up with an as of yet still unknown lover that has not been part of the family he had with Severus and Ginny in your story. So, I'm looking forward to read how you'll continue the plot!
Perhaps Ginny will realise that people are honestly capable of loving more than one person at a time and also realise that since the amount of love a person can feel is in no way limited this means Harry doesn't love one of them any less than the other?
Oh, so curious!

But I will (try and) wait patiently for another chapter to be posted.

In any case, thanks for writing this marvellous story in the first place. It is always a joy to find a well-written, thoroughly-plotted-out story to read and yours definitely fits this description!

Please keep writing!

~Yashida

Sorry, I thought the e-mail address I typed in the 'Email column' would actually show.

Could you please add me to the 'new-chapter' alert, or whatever it's called, so I would get a notification when the next chapter is up?

I'd so hate to miss out on it.

Thank you!

~Yashida

Okay, in the last 48 hours I've read your story from beginning to the last updated chapter. I haven't left a review until now, so I thought I'll give it a try now. Firstly, I really love how you let the story evolve slowly. I would get into detail but I think you know your plot better than I. Still it is really a change, normally, Harry and Severus would have sprung into the bed, once Severus was recovered from Narginis bite, which is kind of nice but shallow.

Well, I'll try to give feedback in order to the storyline but I'll most certainly fail. Nonetheless here it comes.
I adored it when Harry manipulated Hermione into leaving Spinner's End. *grin*
I really liked it, when Snape told Harry what a idiot he was being, when he forbid Ginny to work.
I love your Ginny. You gave her a character and defined her in a way that made her extremely likeable. Moreover, I liked her interaction with Severus and how they talked. I found it sad that you didn't have a scene just between Ginny and Severus while Harry and Severus were already lovers. As concerning Severus' and Harry's affair I found Severus appeared a little cold in regard to Harry's cheating on Ginny with him.

Nonetheless, I even found your H/G not only tolerable but bordering on good, which in my case is saying something as I normally abhor that paring. In your story, I could really understand Harry's conflict, because it was so clear that he loved both Ginny and Severus. I felt my moral was challenged, because Harry and Ginny are married. Normally, I root for Ginny to finally be gone, but in this case I was torn, because both should be allowed to have Harry.
What I find sad is that there is so little interaction between Harry and James or Harry, James and Severus. James always seems to be just with Ginny.*pout*

I think I fell in love with the story when you made that great connection between the prologue

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want to hate you so much. Your story has kept me away from my own and my heart is pounding. This story is so amazing. I just absolutely love all your twists and turns. I 'm just not sure I know that words that can truly do justice to just how awesome and amazing this story is. So I'm going to shut post my review and get back to my own business before I sound even more like a dumbass. ooh and I agree SEVERUS MUST NEVER BE ON THE BOTTOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok, I have read the whole story in just a couple of days and now... now I'm crying like a baby, you both really are the Queen of Angst! :-)
I really liked what you did with the cannon, hundred times better than DH epilogue, that always made me angry because of the unfairness with Severus. I'm not asking questions about the final chapters because I like to be surprised. Great job! hugs from the tropical Panama.

OMG, poor Harry, poor Ginny and poor Severus, this must be so heart breaking especially for him, because he can't defend himself properly from a portrait and Ginny, she's so hurt and confused and Harry, I know it was wrong but you can't help who you love, he just had the unfortunate bad luck to love two people, people in some ones complete opposites and in others so very much a like, perhaps that's why, I don't know. I just hope that somehow they find a way back to each other (Ginny and Harry) cause although I'm definitely not a fan of this couple, the way you've written Ginny I actually like her (hold your tongue Sarah :D ).

Absolutely fabulous chapter and I have no idea what line you two were fighting over, because for me, the chapter was perfect.

I think you wrote Ginny brilliant, straight from the beginning of the story..and i love the story because of the twists. i thought to give the story a try this morning and now..well...

The only thing on the story which gives me the pain are the last few chapters. Was it not worse enough that Rowling killed Snape?

Oh the good ones die too early *sniffles*
And i was sooo happy you brought him back...and that in such a clever way...and now *wails*

I wanted to give you some chocolates, but now i need it all for myself to cheer me up again

I had to chuckle, I was listening to the soundtrack for Cabaret and it started playing Two Ladies at the same time I started reading chapter 61 where Harry dreamt that he had told Ginny everything. I thought it was oddly ironic :-p. I love this story so far. Keep up the great work :-) if you'd add me to the update list I'd love it.

Ahh... I can't figure it out! My best guess is "She didn't wait for a response, knowing the truth - he would never have forgiven her such a betrayal." But I have a feeling that's not right. I saw many lines that could be possible, but I just had trouble deciding on one. This one has potential for clumsy wording. The only other one I could think of was when Harry looked at Severus and then back to Ginny, because that has a great potential for 'artistic' differences.

I'm glad to see this chapter up. I was going over all of my Snarry to see which ones had updated, and was disappointed that I didn't find this one in the pages of fics that had updated since I'd last checked it. I was ecstatic to see the email that it had updated!

This chapter also makes me so thankful for my husband, who was far more forgiving than Ginny. No details, but I'll just say the three of us were just about as close, and are still a triumverate now after a particular fiasco. *coughcough*

Oh no, you're not going to draw me into that argument. I"m glad you got it resolved, whatever the sentence was. It was good to see Ginny express some very justified anger. They did betray her, no matter what reasons they give for what they did. She has a right to scream and yell for a while yet.

I like how you contrasted the three characters' reactions. Snape, Ginny and Harry all have a distinct voice in this chapter. Good job on that.