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Chapter 20:

Ah, randy young men. Harry really must have studied the manuals to make Ginny happy on this visit.

I'm glad to see Ginny will have a good relationship with SEverus. I loved the "pied au terre." Anytime you use a French phrase to describe something sexual, its just amusing. YOu think, oh those French people... Good job on the chapter.

Chapter 21:

I like how you have Severus' blame shifting from Harry to Shackelbolt. It shows just how far they've come in their relationship, that Harry is not the brunt of Severus' anger.

Good job on the Weasley interaction. I like that Severus thinks he might be able to trust her, and that Ginny thinks she might call him Severus some day. The bit at the end where Severus rubbed smut off Harry's cheek was very sweet, and says more about how he feels than he will ever acknowledge.

I might be a little sadistic... but I can't wait to see what Lucius has in store for them. Hopefully it'll push them to figure things out between the three of them.

my sis-in-law sent this to me and even though i am more into harry/draco this is really good sorry i havent written anything before now but i couldn't stop reading long enough great job so far guys

wow!!!

wow very very good
i was a little behind with reading but these new chapters are awsome
keep up the graet work and postsoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye

So many sexy chapters! I can't wait to see what Lucius has in store for them. And it's only a matter of time before Harry breaks or Ginny figures it out.

So happy!!! I had this wonderful story bookmarked at chapter 26 and I just realized you are now at chapter 50!! Wow, thanks for all the updates. I can't believe Sev is still living with them though I understand he wants to be close to Harry. But isn't he just torturing himself?
I can't believe Harry wanted to polyjuice some whore into his mom, just for Sev. I mean, it's his mother.
But anyway, on to the story. Got a couple more chapters to read. This story is going into my favorites.

Hello!
What a great story! Usually I hate cheating and betray, but your story is so different (in this aspect), it got my attention for sure.
Will Ginny discover their love? Maybe she already know (women always know) and doesn

I have really enjoyed reading this story so far, the drama and suspense has kept me waiting for the next chapter, keep them coming. The character development has been done really well, and the tension is written well too.

Chapter 15:

Okay this is the third time I've tried to review this chapter. Stoopid computer and its stoopid problems. I liked the chapter and how Harry and Severus' relationship is slowly changing.

Chapter 16:

I loved how touched Severus was by the gifts.

The proposal and sex scene was wonderful. Thank you for not making Harry a sex god on the first go.

That he asked Severus for advice was hilarious. Severua tells him to get a "Book of Advice" how Victorian is that? I'm glad he finally unbent and gave him some advice. The father comment was nice. I don't know how that will work into your later plot. I'll have to see, but it does lend a complexity to their relationship that wasn't there before.

Chapter 16:

Kingsley gave Harry some good advice about not going off like a hothead. He's done that too much in the past. I'm sorry to see that Kingsley had to cover for Harry's mouth. He was right to dress him down. It was also nice to see Harry realize that what Kingsley said mirrored what Snape told him for years.


Good for Harry too. He should pull Severus up by the short-hairs for wanting to give up on himself.