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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOT! Very yummy chapter!!!
Please update chapter 53 soon ^_^
Jan
Please update chapter 53 soon ^_^
Jan
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, ma'ams, very much worth the wait! Please, Angst, please please please with warm chocolate on top, please do not relegate future sex scenes to off-stage - that would be cruel and unusual punishment, above and beyond the heaps of angst which we accept as devoted fans.
See, Angst, see the crazy fan giving a nice review? Here it is: oh . . . ahhh . . . uh-huh . . . uhmmmm . . . oh, my . . . *sigh*
Ta!
See, Angst, see the crazy fan giving a nice review? Here it is: oh . . . ahhh . . . uh-huh . . . uhmmmm . . . oh, my . . . *sigh*
Ta!
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
amazing story i wonder what lucius has up his sleeve
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
will they ever get what they want and what happens when they do? poor ginny wouldn't it be perfect if they could all just share
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot wow wow wow wow finally great job guys
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so good! ...Now I feel terrible for enjoying the adultry!!!
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awe... I am so completely into your story! I have no idea how you are going to get rid of Ginny or however you're going to work out getting Harry and Severus together exclusivly... I'm so glad you're writing the story and not me! I would be SO confused! I have absolutely fallen in love with this story and I look forward to the next chapter more than I would like to admit to! Please update again soon! I can't wait!
~dani
~dani
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-Chapter 49 and 50-
Oh, why must the world be so cruel to keep Harry and Severus appart?!
XD
Fantastic chapters, I'm really interested in what's going to happen now in their relationship. And what's to become of Ginny.
I love the way you guys pant the inner turmoil of both Harry and Severus, it has really developed their characters well. ^_^
Oh, why must the world be so cruel to keep Harry and Severus appart?!
XD
Fantastic chapters, I'm really interested in what's going to happen now in their relationship. And what's to become of Ginny.
I love the way you guys pant the inner turmoil of both Harry and Severus, it has really developed their characters well. ^_^
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just love this story! please update very soon!
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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17:
Okay, so Harry was insensitive, but Severus really needs to understand that the boy is grasping for anyone to hang onto that knew his parents. All of the Marauders are dead, and Snape is the only person who remembered his mother. Poor kid. I do feel for him in this situation. That part where Harry confessed his need made me cry. Jerks.
Chapter 18:
What the heck? No Ginny bashing, but you can pick on poor Lucius. No, that was a good chapter. I liked the tension you created from the moment Harry noticed something amiss to the end.
Chapter 19:
Severus' thoughts were a reasonable assumption, but he should have asked before jumping. That is what has characterized their relationship from the beginning. Both of them have made assumptions about the other. I like how you handled that bit of dialogue.
Good observation on what Harry was to Severus.
I like how you mirrored their thoughts about each other.
And then the detente ends. Grimmauld place was one of the worst choices to make, but really the only place that might be safe. I liked the little hidden smile at the end.
Okay, so Harry was insensitive, but Severus really needs to understand that the boy is grasping for anyone to hang onto that knew his parents. All of the Marauders are dead, and Snape is the only person who remembered his mother. Poor kid. I do feel for him in this situation. That part where Harry confessed his need made me cry. Jerks.
Chapter 18:
What the heck? No Ginny bashing, but you can pick on poor Lucius. No, that was a good chapter. I liked the tension you created from the moment Harry noticed something amiss to the end.
Chapter 19:
Severus' thoughts were a reasonable assumption, but he should have asked before jumping. That is what has characterized their relationship from the beginning. Both of them have made assumptions about the other. I like how you handled that bit of dialogue.
Good observation on what Harry was to Severus.
I like how you mirrored their thoughts about each other.
And then the detente ends. Grimmauld place was one of the worst choices to make, but really the only place that might be safe. I liked the little hidden smile at the end.