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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-chapter 51-
Will the hotness ever cease? I most certainly hope not! I like the way you handled their first time, more realistic than most stuff I see.
Their connection grows! Yay!
I can't wait to find out what happens now.
P.S -> I just looked at your reviews before reading this, 265 congrats! You guys deserve every one of them. :)
Will the hotness ever cease? I most certainly hope not! I like the way you handled their first time, more realistic than most stuff I see.
Their connection grows! Yay!
I can't wait to find out what happens now.
P.S -> I just looked at your reviews before reading this, 265 congrats! You guys deserve every one of them. :)
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am very impressed with this story. I'm so glad you've decided to keep it canon, according to what is actually in the book. I like AU's well enough, but I love when people take the material they have and fit their idea into it. I enjoy the realism you have put into this story... the way Harry doesn't think it feels that great the first time and that he's a little bit afraid. Those emotions and feelings are real. They make your characters more true to form. Thank you for providing me with a very entertaining story.
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August 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter
keep up the good work and post soon
bye bye
keep up the good work and post soon
bye bye
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.
I'd say finally, but really, the foreplay for me is all the stuff that leads up to this. That was mind-blowing. Now I can't wait to see if Snape addresses Harry's feelings on their first-time position.
I'll admit it. I'm *totally* jealous!
I suppose you'll leave us all hanging for a bit now, won't you? I mean, we've been begging and begging for it even more than Harry and we're not even the ones Snape is... right. This is my cake. I have it and I shall eat it too!!
Thank you for that great post. I am *so* glad I didn't open that at work (I'm just reviewing at work...)
I'd say finally, but really, the foreplay for me is all the stuff that leads up to this. That was mind-blowing. Now I can't wait to see if Snape addresses Harry's feelings on their first-time position.
I'll admit it. I'm *totally* jealous!
I suppose you'll leave us all hanging for a bit now, won't you? I mean, we've been begging and begging for it even more than Harry and we're not even the ones Snape is... right. This is my cake. I have it and I shall eat it too!!
Thank you for that great post. I am *so* glad I didn't open that at work (I'm just reviewing at work...)
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22:
Has Harry been taking lessons from stone-age men on marriage? Really, getting married right out of school and not wanting her to work? What was he thinking? I'm with Snape on this one. Better clear out of the room before she explodes/kills Harry.
Chapter 23:
Harry, Harry, Harry. Shakes head mournfully. You are SO wrong about this.
Chapter 24:
Go Severus! Someone needed to tell Harry what a pig he was being. I loved the line: "...the great Harry Potter's brat factory." That made me laugh.
Chapter 25:
I like how you're slowly increasing Harry's dependance on Severus. His thoughts on not having Severus with him at the Quidditch match were really well written. I am glad you didn't let Harry dig in his heels too long on the whole work issue. He was being riddiculous, though I do understand that he wants a family desperately. He never had one before, and he sees Ginny as a way to get one.
Has Harry been taking lessons from stone-age men on marriage? Really, getting married right out of school and not wanting her to work? What was he thinking? I'm with Snape on this one. Better clear out of the room before she explodes/kills Harry.
Chapter 23:
Harry, Harry, Harry. Shakes head mournfully. You are SO wrong about this.
Chapter 24:
Go Severus! Someone needed to tell Harry what a pig he was being. I loved the line: "...the great Harry Potter's brat factory." That made me laugh.
Chapter 25:
I like how you're slowly increasing Harry's dependance on Severus. His thoughts on not having Severus with him at the Quidditch match were really well written. I am glad you didn't let Harry dig in his heels too long on the whole work issue. He was being riddiculous, though I do understand that he wants a family desperately. He never had one before, and he sees Ginny as a way to get one.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26:
Poor Severus, and I can imagine Harry's dreams that 'he can't remember' are quite similar. Lucius is too astute a person not to want to use Severus in any way he can. That was quite ominous and really a good touch.
Chapter 27:
Trust Lucius Malfoy to mix things up a bit. I wonder, though if that's what he meant by the quote.
Chapter 28:
What a shock! And it had to be our Potions Master that found it out. Poor guy. I do feel sorry for him. If he had acted before Harry's wedding, I wonder how things would have changed.
Poor Severus, and I can imagine Harry's dreams that 'he can't remember' are quite similar. Lucius is too astute a person not to want to use Severus in any way he can. That was quite ominous and really a good touch.
Chapter 27:
Trust Lucius Malfoy to mix things up a bit. I wonder, though if that's what he meant by the quote.
Chapter 28:
What a shock! And it had to be our Potions Master that found it out. Poor guy. I do feel sorry for him. If he had acted before Harry's wedding, I wonder how things would have changed.
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! Have been reading some real trash lately and this was like a warm sommer wind, just what I needed. The story feels real and you kept me up to 3 am in the morning, forgetting that I have to get up at 4.30 for work, to read it all. Every time that Severus and Harry is alone I keep waiting for Ginny to show up and for it all to come crashing down. *heart pounding* (Sry about any spell-mistakes, I'm swedish really) Many hugs and good luck with this amazing story. Plz update soon! /Just me
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I got so wrapped up in what's going on I'd forgotten the rest of the story that happened before and I just went back and read the prologue and where it all starts is obviously in the future because it mentions Albus and all three of the children which means that he stays with Ginny and so of course she couldn't die and now I'm just dying to see how they all work things out!
Oh yes, and thank you sweet ones for our wonderful boys finally going all the way!
Oh yes, and thank you sweet ones for our wonderful boys finally going all the way!
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awe... Sweet even though its just mostly a sex scene! I loved it! You made his first seemingly very enjoyable! Keep up the excellent work!
~dani
~dani
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August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Roughly 40 angst-filled chapters to admit they like each other - check
Another 10 spent on pins and needles before they have great sex - check
And I'm still wondering how Ginny is going to react to all of this.
Another 10 spent on pins and needles before they have great sex - check
And I'm still wondering how Ginny is going to react to all of this.