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My goodness!! You've been awfully busy! That's what I get for trying to work on a story of my own. I come back here and you've added three? four? more chapters to your story. It's now waaaay past my bedtime, but I find it extremely hard to care. My boys (men) are finally shagging each other senseless!!

I'm anxious for the part where Ginny "figures it all out." I won't say that it's giving me nightmares, but it's rather distracting to have that worry pop up while trying to (re)write scenes.

I want to say thank you again for how you've portrayed Ginny in your story and her relationship with Harry. Too many people out there get into the whole Ginny-bashing thing when it comes to pairing Harry with Snape and/or Draco. One of the few exceptions to this (outside yourselves, of course) is Vorabiza's "Secrets". Lovely story. If you haven't read it yet, do so now. But back to what I was saying. I love that she's a strong, likeable character and I'm desperately hoping that this all works out in the end so that no one is left alone (killing Snape off is unacceptable and as soon as you accept this, the better off we'll all be). I think time-share is a wonderful idea.

Even if Snape isn't as nasty as we knew him to be in the books, the transition from Snape-the-Bastard to Snape-who-loves-Harry was done beautifully. That's another iffy part that many people tend to rush through. You've done an amazing job.

I'm sorry I didn't get around to writing sooner. RL sucks, but my baby is my world, so it had to be done. Literal baby. Well, toddler. She likes Snape too and while she doesn't understand at all about this HP world (she's seen movies 1-3, though) she does know that "Snape is the bad man who wasn't really all bad." You would get her vote too if she was a) old enough to be reading this and b) showed the same appreciation...

So, I shall make a note to check this more often so that I don't miss anymore updates.

That said, I still have more to write on the HPDM and another "scene" for this stupid SSHPLM I've gone and started... just a month before NaNoWriMo starts up again. Will you guys be there? (www.nanowrimo.org) I will be. The screenname is the same, I think.

Cheers for the Queens of Angst!!!!

Gah! T_T Poor Severus. I know it's a repeat of last review, but... #sobs# it's sooo sad. Great update with even more knicker-combusting hawtness of the Snarry kind (*damn* was the smut in this chap flamin'! #fans self#) Much as I love the Ginny in ATYLB, I really do want her to find out 'cuz I love Severus more... plus the angst when it all comes out is going to be fantastic! I foresee some rather spectacularly written argument scenes in the future ^_^ always good to read! Waiting with bated breath for the next update... which makes me hope it'll be as quick as the last couple have or I might pass out from lack of oxygen!!! :D

OMG.... I thought ginny was going to pop her head round the door any second...and see that Severus really did have Harry tied up!! lol You can tell that the emotions they feel are feeding off each other and some one is going to crack soon. I think Harry will let his guilt get the better of him and tell ginny soon. It opens the way for a whole new dynamic to their relationship.
can't hardl wait for more...

Another good and hot chapter. I loved the line "Manner cost nothing." That made me laugh. I like the way you portrayed Harry wanting Severus and how Severus was holding back just to tease him. Good job.

wow i haven't checked for a few days and there was 3 new chapters (happy dance) i am really loving this story i am usually more of a harry/draco kind of girl but this is great!!! i am really feeling for snape though. i have actually experienced having to watch someone you love, loving someone else. many years ago but ouch!! i'm wondering about malfoy and what he has up his sleeve. i just know you are getting ready to throw us for a loop. oh well i'm ready.again, great story

Oh Gods!!! Every chapter has me feeling so sorry for Severus! Maybe he should leave for a couple of months?

Please update chapter 57 soon ^_^

Jan

Wow, I'm gone for a while and suddenly there's three chapters! Awesome!

Though, is it bad of me that I want Ginny to walk in on them? *shifty*

Eeep... I'm sorry I didn't review the last chapter, I only just read the update email! Was great tho... Angsty... Smex... MMMMMMM... And as for this chapter... GAH! All that smut and then... GAH! T_T Poor Severus! LMAO over Harry's trouser tent and ROFLMAO'ed over the part where Severus got his own back for Harry taunting him - genius!

Every update I read I'm perched on the edge of my seat, wondering if this is going to be the one where Ginny finds out about them, my butt's goin' numb from being so precariously perched! :D Still, it's the sign of a good story that I'm that worked up! And... DAMN! Did you girls ever show everyone who was terrified that this wasn't a Snarry how wrong they were! That was some serious panty-melting smut, hoozah for that! Am eagerly awaiting next update.

Another amazing chapter and such quick updates! At this point, I have to say, I'm finding this to be less about reading hot sex but more about the characters' connections and their relationships with each other. I don't want to call Ginny naive but I can understand how when a person loves their partner and trusts them completely, it's quite easy to walk around with blinders and not realise what's right there, especially when the other person is a close friend. She will eventually find out, right?

Another sad chapter. Poor all of them. The situation is like watching a newsclip of a train wreck. You know the car and the people in it have no chance for salvation when the train plows over them, but you just have to watch. Something has got to happen. Ginny can't be that unaware of the sexual tension between the two men, and Severua or Harry will eventually give something away.

I can't wait for the next chapter, but dread reading it at the same time. Good job. You've made me ambivalent about the relationship of all three of them.