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Please update chapter 59 soon ^_^

Jan

Hey, loved the father/son moments. Sympathy for Sev and can harry be any more oblivious?

But... But... But... I *LIKE* the smex! T_T Seriously though, it was a pleasant change of pace to have such a different chapter - loved the feeding scene LOL, poor Harry. And I liked the way that you slipped in a little bit of angst at the very end, cuz let's face it, we wouldn't be happy without a little bit of angst in each chapter! Am still perched on edge of seat though, wondering just when Lucius is going to make known his dastardly and diabolical plan to ruin Harry and Severus... much closer to the edge of the seat and I'm gonna be hovering in mid-air! Very much so looking forward to the next update ^_^

That was sad, Snape referring to himself as Harry's "Dirty secret of a lover."

Harry is so down on himself about being a parent. I get the feeling it has less to do with him actually being incompetent and more to do with his upbringing. Snape and Ginn probably sense that and see what Harry always will miss about himself. Harry is more than just a tool to be discarded, or a burdent to be borne. Poor guy.

Great job on the chapter.

Oh dear, here we go with the jealousy. Not that it is unfounded, while Harry evidently loves Snape Ginny is his wife and they have a child together; how on earth do you compete with that? Severus will continue to compare his relationship with Harry with the one Harry shares with his family and that will bring tension and no doubt several arguments and I am so ready, they were way to happy for too long. Yes, yes I am a big old meanie.

I really like that story!

How long will it be before Ginny learns the truth?

You two are amazing, throwing out these chapters so fast! :D
I love how playful Severus is with Harry in this. ^_^
And another hot scene! It fills my inner perv with joy. :)

Like it? LIKE IT? Bloody hell! That was... Gah... There are no words. #melts into puddle of goo# With the... And the... And then... Gah. ^_^; Loved the way you slipped some truly heart-breaking angst into hands down the best smut scene I've read in a Snarry fic before! I also loved the humour at the start of this chapter... Severus teasng Harry by sucking his thigh... classic! #sighs happily#

Hot really hot, and pivotal because this scenes further our, um... interest, yes they further our interest and touches our, er... imaginations so we can dream about; tied up young men? Well there you go, by writing this scene you help me reach my dreams.

*Sniff*
Adultery stories are so hard on my poor little heart. I felt so bad for Severus at the end of this chapter.
Every time I read an update I become more and more curious as to how things will end up in the end...

Another great chapter, you two are just amazing!