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Wow, a good portion of action.. liked that chap...

An update! Fabulous! I've just caught myself up and as wrong as it is, I must say that I am not bothered by Ginny's captivity in the least. Continue with your amazing work and I look forward to an update.

Oh, you guys are so terrible. I can't wait for a new chapter. The whole experience of this chapter was just intense. You better get to crackin', Missies, no writer's block for you.

Wow. That's the only other thing I can say.

Sorry for the interruption of the flow of praise the previous person posted. I have spoken to the author about reporting you, but since you don't even have the guts to post a signed review, (clever little thing aren't you?)
since she would rather deal with you outside the scope of the admins, I've decided I should write and refute your assinine comments.

1. Canon is the continuation of a story using known events from that story. Point in fact, no fanfiction is completely canon, but the authors of this work have used canon events both in the book and released after the fact to build their story.

2. Harry, in fact, did NOT repay Narcissa by saving Draco in DH. Point in fact, the events leading up to the destruction of the diadem occurred BEFORE Narcissa reported falsely to the Dark Lord.

3. Lucius, Narcissa and Draco all escaped Azkaban. That is canon. Lucius served time in Azkaban during the sixth book.

4. If you have nothing constructive to say. Don't say it. The authors each have invested a year of their creative life in the story. Shut up if you have nothing better to do than point out your own ignorance.

5. If you are going to leave reviews of people's work, whether the review is good or bad, at least have the courtesy of using a dictionary to check the words you don't know how to spell such as: cannon/canon, ur/your, cuase/because.

6. Review your basic grammar. You just look ignorant when you write and can't get your tenses correct.

Sorry to interrupt the meliflous flow of absolute idiocy from the last reviewer.

tambrathegreat




Sorry for the idiocy of responding to the anonymous

Happy Anniversary!

Ah, Harry and Severus find time for an interlude, and Lucius is still plotting and scheming. What an odd occurance; magic going haywire at the Ministry. One wonders if there is significance there?

I'm really enjoying the original plot in this fic. Whatever fuels your muse, keep on with it. I'm still here, still reading, and still waiting for more.

Oh Lucius, I just don't know what to do with you. *Sigh*

It was kind of sad when Ginny was thinking about Harry and Severus. Poor dear is blind-sighted.

But yay, then came more of that delicious hotness that you two are so fantastic at. ^_^

I hope you had a great Halloween, and sorry I haven't been as diligent about my reviews lately, my life is chaos right now. Of course, that just makes it all the better when I have something fun to sit down and read, like this. :)

oh hell, i just read 66 chapters all in one go and im exhausted!!!! i LOVe this story. i dont know why i didn't read it before.....oh well, i'll read and review every chapter from now on. do yo have an alert list? i'd very much like to be on it if you do.

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Lovely scene between Harry and Severus. The reader can feel the deep affection each of the men has for the other. It is quite nice.

Lucius' plan seems to be going along swimmingly. I hope he doesn't succeed, what ever it is. It just doesn't seem fair that he wants retribution on Harry for actions his son took because of Lucius' affiliation an loyalty. Severus, well, he did betray the Dark Lord, as well he should. Though if anyone were to understand the need to be on the winning side, I think Lucius would. That alone would ameliorate some of Severus' culpability in Lucius' mind.

Great job as usual. Happy All Hallow's Day, and have a safe trip, Q.

Harry aniversary!!!!!

Holly crap I just had one of those weirds moments. I finished the chapter and was going to review (really I was) when I noticed there was a new chaper. How cool is that!

Any how I did not read the latest chapter because this chapter filled me with concern for Draco. I should probably be more concerned for Harry, Ginny and Sev but the situation seemed so unfair. Lucius just made Draco an accomplice to lord knows what and by doing so, placed Draco in a situation were he will have to possibly betray his father in order to save his own family. That started this chain reaction of dramatic thoughts in my head that almost made me call my sons to make sure they were being good. I know Draco's relationship with Lucius is not the best but they are still father and son and it is going to be hard to deal with.

Also I wonder what Draco's relationship is with Severus in this story. I know Lucius hates Severus but how does Draco feels about him?

Oh! On the previous chapter when Ginny is thinking about Harrys and Severus fatherly relationship I felt ashamed of cheering the guys on. This Ginny is too nice! And sweet and understanding... Are we wrong? I mean, Harry/Severus seems right but this girl has not done anything bad. Has she? Does she have a dark, dirty secret? Hmmm maybe she is a serial killer, there is not telling what she does on those trips...
Anyhow I'm going to read the next one.

I read three chapters today, three! Now that is a good aniversary.

Did Lucius have something to do with the problems at the Ministry? He knows Ginny has meetings every Friday so it would have been a good way to control the boys location. This is so exciting! Is not that I want bad things to happen but; well no, that is a lie. I want bad things to happen! I want to see the evil plan you (er Lucius) came up with.

It is Saturday and I am late calling my mother, she is probably sitting alone by the phone, knitting with her arthritic hands but ignoring the pain because making a scarf for me brings her happines and also helps dull the pain my delaid call brings; but don't worry she understands I had to review first. ;p