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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeek! Sev! Although, that certainly explains the first chapter... Poor Harry. He lost Sev twice, and it must have been a lot harder this time!
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, really hate both of you right now. I'm pulling no punches. That chapter was too well written. I'm still crying from it and I don't appreciate you killing Severus a day after my birthday and ON HIS Birthday.

That being said, I loved the twist. It was unexpected and really a good bit of plotting. I also liked that you made Ginny a fighter, not a shrinking violet. Very good job. I'm still a little angry though.

person catnona
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG you made me cry!!! Brilliant writing! More please, I just love the angsty stuff
person cravedom
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, fuck! One way or another somebody was going to get hurt but I had really hoped it was Ginny. I know I have said before this Ginny was a wonderful woman but evidently she was not nice enough to die. Um, that was not kind...

This will make the news and Draco is going to figure it out, I wonder what he will do! While I do not like the notion that Severus is dead the chapter was very good and action filled. What do you think? Should we say that at least Severus was able to experience happines in his short second chance at living? Or do we bemoan that is was cruel to let him glimpse at love just to have it taken away? It is sad either way.

Do you think Harry is going to feel so guilty that he will confess?

This is nowhere near over; is it? Because it seems that there is still so much going on.
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
eh?! no it can't be... can it? you can't end it there... can you?
*turns into a babbling reck* i..it... it... it can't... can it?
please say it isn't?!
omg please say you haven't?
that's heart wrenching! like well and truly soul destroying!
please say you didn't?!
person Darkless
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh evil, evil EVIL cliffhanger! How dare you leave us hanging there...and at Christmas too! AAaaarrrrrgggghh! *sobs*

I know it's Snarry, but I love your Ginny and have grown to love their little triad of love even though it's become a sordid love triangle. O' the comming angst will be fulsome.
person cravedom
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You evil fiends!!!!! A cliffie? After all this time?

Do you think Lucius is going to ask for Severus? It would be a horrible for Harry to fear for both of them.

OMG Luvius has an alibi but Draco does not! Is this darn man going to get his family in trouble again


I am sorry about your writers block and that is a genuine sentiment, it is not good for me when y'all don't update. Hopefully the holidays and all the horrible shopping will inspire you with ways to torture our beloved characters. Happy Holidays!

schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you both so much for taking the time to write this story!
I absolutely adore the plot and your Sevvy-Poo <33
I can't wait to read more!
Love always,
Cookieee!
person anon
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

yeah; another chapter. love the story.
person SamHill
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Wow... To say that I have been waiting on pins and needles for this would be an understatement and now you've gone and left me with a cliffhanger...

It's wonderful and scary and makes me want to shake the whole lot of them. I cannot wait for you to update again, but I totally understand about RL slapping people around like the bitch it is. Wouldn't it be grand if you we could just remain immersed in the world of Harry Potter forever? Taking with us, of course, our families…

This has been quite the journey that you’ve taken us and though the destination still seems far off, the scenery is wonderful and the means of transportation a vividly delightful one. I only hope that you do not make us weep in these next few chapters. I fear for them all…

And please, don’t make me sympathize with Narcissa. It’s just rotten of you!!

P.S. Snape has just asked that I inform everyone that it takes more than an oversized snake to get him down and Queens of Angst have earned his vote for not simply writing him off like some other brilliantly cruel authors did. We should all, apparently, be taking pointers from them.