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for All That You Leave Behind

by SickPuppy

schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh you didn't! at least i don't think you did... please say you haven't!
*hugs you and hands you large amounts of goodies in the hopes that you didn't*
please please please let him still be alive... or come back... well you know what I mean!!
person Darkless
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius Malfoy is an evil, superior-minded, all-around Bastard. His plans worked perfectly and now the Potter family is missing one very integral member. 'Tis very sad indeed. Can't wait to see where you take this.
person cravedom
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Resurrection stone? I understand him wanting to talk to Sev but is that all he is up to? Was there a portrait of Headmaster Snape? Now I wonder have to wonder about whats hapenning and the title of the story. Since my ideas are all very pesimistic I will just take a Prozac and wait for the next chapter.

Now for some short comments or questions

* Did Lucius exchange wands with Fairdude?
* Does Ron knows when to shut up?
* Why would Hermione never mention to Harry that the time turner had been taken from her before?
* Will Severus want to come back if able? It seems unlikely...

Do you feel tempted to compromise your writers integrity and give us what we want when we whine a lot?
person Dirty_darella
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it's been so long since I reviewed, I only have the usual life excuses. >.>

Oh, but now I come back to this?! Sheesh *shakes head*
Lol, I don't think I would be able to forgive you if you'd added "the end" at the end of the chapter....


Anyway, this was brilliant as always. I can't wait to see how you guys end this. (With a happy ending, right? Right?! *frets*)
Well, whatever direction you guys take it next, I'm sure will be great..
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*stares in disbelief* What?!?! You'd best have a timeturner or something in your backpocket!!! I started reading this last week and am now hooked. So dont kill Sev off!!!! Please?!?! * kneels* PLEASE?! *sobs* i'll be waiting!!!!

I guess that means I should leave you my address for updates then, huh? :D

inuyoukaimei@yahoo.com
person Kat
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*screams*O...M...G! I can't believe you two actually did that! *screams* WHY?!?!?!?!?! Yes I know it's better that Harry stay with Ginny but I mean really?!?!?! How is Harry going to make it past this? Hmmmmm? You two had him catamose for EIGHT DAYS after he THOUGHT Sev was dead that first time!!!!!!!!!!!!! Is he going to be a walking shell this time?!?!?! Hmmmmmm?!?!?!
Anyway, all of that aside. You two lovely ladies are absolutely FABULOUS authoresses and I ADORE this story. (which I started 3 days ago) Hope this fulfills your demand for reviews and about how you could take it. ^_~
schedule January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you...did..not. *cries* Why must he die! *clings to Severus Plushie* Why could Ginny die. I don't like her. But other wise the whole Severus dying thing.. very nice chapter.
person anon
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, well of course that's VERY disappointing.
But great story, whether he stays dead or not.
person Darkless
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sits staring dumbly at words on screen*
person Black Nightshade7
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's not really it, is it? I mean I really love your story, but please don't let him die!!!