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for Yuleride

by Ms_Figg

person suckerforsnape
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it from start to finish. Thanks
person Voracious reader
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could Imperio buearocrats too!! Loved the epilogue, absolutely perfect, laughed my butt off! How do you spell 'beurocrat' anyway? I can never get that right.
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this from the begining. I have to say you have written a well thought out story and it has kept my atterntion and having me craving for the next time you would update. What would be awsome if you start writing small side stories about their adventures. Mabey sex involved. Up to you. Keep up the good work!
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao that was great! especially loved the part where Sev went around hexing people to get the adoption though it seems like such a him thing to do lol
person Lady Disdain
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story my dear! I wonder what you will come up with next!
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person makaem
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great ending!
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW NICE FLUFFY ENDING LOVE IT, THIS IS A GREAT STORY, YOU KNOW HOW TO HOOK ME. NOW GET TO WORK ON THAT SAVOIRS STORY I KNOW THERES GONNA BE A FIGHT, GOOD WRITING TO YOU!!!
person shelagh
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!!!!Happy Holidays!!!
schedule December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice! that was pretty hot!