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by Ms_Figg

person Melina Raye
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Severus.... is just too great!

You Ms_Figg are an amazing writer. I can't wait for more.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the way you write severus. he's always such an unpleasant prick. so entertaining.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story, but not liking Snape much right now. lol He is using her to his own ends, even if he thinks it's for her own good. And, great sex does not a relationship make. He so needs to learn that before he runs her off completely. :-) And, the image in my head of Ron pretending with a blow up doll under the instruction of his brother...HYSTERICAL!

Great writing! Please keep it up. Thanks! HG4eva
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo he is so clever! i love him!
person Angie30
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOoo an Evil Snape! Love it, I can't wait to see what he does lol. I'm sorry to say but I really don't like Ron never have and in this story I think Hermione is being a twit and she just can't stand the fact that Snape has hit a very raw nerve when it comes to her so called "Safe" relationship with Ron. She knows deep down that Snape is right but is too stubborn to admit it.I got a feeling Snape is going to make sure Hermione catches Ron in the act this time and when she does all hell is going to break loose. I look forward to the next chapter. BRAVO!!!!!!!!!
person Snakelette
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ron has her emotionally, Severus has her physically. Just good sex and distracting Ron won't really get him Hermione (though the good sex will help a lot ;) ). He's going to have to invest some emotions too, in the end. But a sneaky Snape is so much fun to read about. Let the plotting continue :D
person kcision
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn it hermione, show some griffindor guts!
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He's such a Slytherin getting Minerva to do what he wants without asking.
hehehehehehe

When are you going to update "Through the Looking Glass?"
person pia
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a good fic...so far...please update
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this story is taking a complete turn from where I thought it was goin before it was put on Hiatus. I'm really impressed. You've never really improved on Hermione and Rons relationship but I'm afraid that if i was hermione i wouldn't have lasted as long in that relationship as she did. NO ORAL, MY BIG TOE!!!!!!!!
anywho, Thanks for keeping me guessing.

You are the queen of Fanfic!!

Devotedly yours
Slytherin-Princess