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for Yuleride

by Ms_Figg

person Lyida
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHHH! this is so great. i am left wanting more. i do hope you will update soon.
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o that was great! i can't wait to see how he entices her
person CB13
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ms_Figg!!!! If only YOU could collect Potions residuals!!! Brilliant use of the Bezoar!!!!

Ok. Have to finish the chapter now.

cheers

CB
person ismene5
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting better and better.I want to see the room.
Go Severus go.
person Belle
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every new chapter I read I got very bad feeling. And it grows with each chapter. You always write SS&HG with a happy ending. We all want it and... it is soooo predictable (and lovely and cute and fantastic etc) BUT it would be very cunning of you (and very cruel also) to end this fic differently. The plot is just right for this. But I hope you won't do it. I know it's wrong and in the real life I would wholeheartedly agree that she should stay with gentle and loving Ron. Sev is doing it the wrong way and if she ever find out (which I suppose she will... it wouldn't be fun any other way) she should never talk to him again. But it's not real life. And as much as I love Ron, I think he won't be doing such sweet gestures as soon as Bill and Fleur stop nagging him...
Well, I got carried away a little. But I can't help the feeling. I hope you will prove me wrong. Pleeease, prove me wrong!
As always, thanks for the story.
Hugs,
Belle
person makaem
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters, hope you're feeling better. Stomach bugs are miserable.
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only Severus would consider honesty as a last-resort tactical option! Very good chapter.
person T. Ali
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3: i got butterflies when he was seducing hermione to join him! (^_^) i like this story so far ;)
person T. Ali
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I can't wait for dinner ;)
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is getting very good, i hope you post more soon,,cant wait to read more,,please let them get together,,ron is not right for hermione..never was, not even in the books..make snape really fall in love with hermione, her fall just as hard..