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Oh my, Hermione is one lucky, lucky (and thoroughly satisfied!) witch!

that was great

I really like this and was so glad you continued it this year, I was diaspointed when you decided to end it where you did originally. I'd love it if you could mention in the epilouge snape somehow taking care of hermione, I know it's not his personality but if she got sick in eygpt or someone tried to steal her passport on the bus (my dad was there travelling and he had his passport around his neck in a case and since he had his hands full someone tried to reach under his shirt to get the passport. He pushed them out the open dorr of the bus..... anyways) something to that effect he did say that he would take care of her and I'd just like to see a scene where Snape kinda prooves/cementts for Hermione that she made the right choice with him. Anyways, I'm babbling but I loved the story!

Whoa! That was fantastic! You handled Ron perfectly... I agree he wasn't a jerk deep down, he just wasn't seeing what both of them needed.

Okay, Ron isn't a git.
He is very young. Thats true.

Thanks for the chapter!

that was great! lol but i would have loved to see someone tear into him again

Another well written chapter. Thank you for making Ron mature enough to see the error in his ways. Other stories have him being a super git and sometimes abusive, and I just can't believe it. Well done!

Very nice how you made Ron grasp Hermione's idea of 'living' ;) Very well done! Can't wait for the next update!

Devious, devious Severus! Muhahaha! I love it. :-) Let's just hope that it works.

Serad: I'm sorry you see it that way, but usually I write the kind of stories I like to read. It has nothing to do with exorcising demons. I just enjoy writing. But there have been a number of stories with a "strong" Hermione. Love Can Be a Battle or a War, Hard Times for Severus Snape, Payback is a Witch, A New Beginning and more, can't list them all here. I do have a tendency to write her as someone trying to find herself in some manner, through a number of ways, and even in this story, although she is divided, she shows strength where it counts, in my estimation. She gets the upper hand on Snape more than once. You can see the inner strength, it just has to be brought out a bit. I'm sorry so many of my stories depress and annoy you. Perhaps, if you see the story is going someplace with the characters that you don't appreciate, you can find another piece that better suits your tastes. There are thousands of fan fics out here, and a number of wonderful, talented writers who possibly weave the characters more to your liking. I can't please everyone, so I stick to the standard of pleasing myself . At least that way, somebody's pleased. Thank you so much for your honest commentary.