rate_review Reviews

I loved this story! It's well written too.

Well that was just too sad. I have to admit that I skimmed much of the story because it was too much for me (sissy that I am). It really is only one more example of the kind of things perpetrated against children and portrayed skillfully by a great storyteller. Thanks for sharing your talent. p

I'm the 200th reviewer! Wow, this story is AMAZING in every way. I LOVE dark, obsessive Draco every now and then, and you characterized him perfectly. The way he wanted to be sure that all of Hermione's feelings were caused by him, even anger and hatred, showed just how crazy and terrible he is. And he's such a bastard for controlling her in every way and flaunting her around. The interaction between Hermione and Draco was sexy and haunting, and the chase in chapter 9 was described so well; I'm so glad that you included a chase! I feel bad for Hermione, but I love how this isn't supposed to be a happy story; Draco is just a jerk and that's not going to change. I wish that this story was longer because it is too good!

I loved these lines: "You know, for someone who just tried to commit adultery, you have a lot of self-righteous anger, love" AND "As long as I'm first, that's all that matters" (Ch. 9 is just great). Thanks for writing and sharing this seductive story! Love it, love, love it -- cheers!

I read this a really long time ago at IATQO I think and it was so not my kind of fic. It was so disturbing and I wanted Hermione to be able to get out of that awful marriage so much. However, this fic was unforgettable and well written. Couldn't she just have poisoned him or something? And I wonder if Draco loves her at all. It makes you think. I was looking at this b/c I like your Veela fic so much and wanted to check out what else you've written. Even though most of this was disturbing, I have to admit I found the Blaise voyeur scene super hot.

This story is AMAZING. This is how a marriage fic should be!! Hermione would NEVER want to marry Draco.
I love how you kept everyone in character. Like Dark Draco, Weak Hermione, Manipulative Narcissa and supportive McGonagall! Everything about this story is just PERFECT! If only there were more like this, realistic!

I will definetly be reading this again!! Well done!!!!!

Bravo on finishing your exquisite story! I loved every sexy chapter. Good characterizations of Draco and Hermione. You're loaded with talent. Damn, it was great. I loved your lemons too. Makes me wish that I wrote it. I hope you feel proud. Thanks for sharing your story with us in Harry Potter fiction world - I got much pleasure from it.

Wonderful story!! Bittersweet ending though. But now that I think about it, any other ending would've been off. Thank You for a great story, and please do keep writing!!^^

YadaYaya(:

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I wish you would make a sequel to this story :-(. I reread it over and over and wish there was more

Your story was well written and carries the read through the emotions really well. I just can't stomach the fact that Hermione has lost her free will and never gets it back. That is my greatest fear. I kept reading hoping that she would have some small victory but she never does. I am glad you put in her comment about WHY they were the poster family. It showed she may not have an rights or free will, but she never lost herself. I was highly disappointed in the fact that she never does getting anything on Draco and I wish you would have had a dark-fic warning on it. I would be appreciative on the revenge of Hermione by her children.

-Witch Myth