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person HoneyB9
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u know what,i like DARK DRACO and weak hermione,infact i dont think she is weak in this story,she is just being less bitchy,thats all. i read the other reviews,and i have to say to u that u dont have to change anthing in this story,this first chapter is perfect and i already inlove with it! i do beleive that Draco is not a strait up jerk,and hopefully he'll be romantic and start loving hermione in the future.but dont turn this into 100% fluff and smut fic,i hate it when draco being overly sweet and overly nice coz that is so not draco,He is a MALFOY for god sake.not obnoxiously bastard,but an irresistable lady killer =)(u know wat i mean,not a cold blooded murderer..lol)

i'm waiting for the part when husband rape their wife (i'm not twisted,but draco is too hot,its not going to be rape once hermione enjoyed it..i'm sure she will)
If blaise watch draco take hermione might be damn hot..why not..lol
Hermione will love draco rite?they will get married and live happily ever after rite? with sum drama,break up and make up ,rite?
u make me want draco like crazy ya know..lol how i wish i can trade place wit hermione,i seriously wouldnt be bother if he want to take me by force or watver he please..lol..coz he is draco,that mean i'll enjoy it.

schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great! A marriage law fic that deals with the possibility, that Hermione can
person reirei
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying it. Must read the other story to see and note on differences. :P Good work!!!!!!!
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good start,
I'm not really very into marriage law fics,
But this one seems interesting.
Kepp up the good work.

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow you really are a little stroy factory it really is brill to see.

I like this goos start. Draco seems a lot more of a down right bastard in this than in any of your other fics. But I like it. One question I was not total sure what Hermiones feeling where while she was giving Draco a blow job was she secrectly enjoying it cus it was Malfoy or that she was thinking and remebering Ron or a bit of both.

Anyway still great as allways and I shal leave my self in your tursting hands
person Delfin
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i totally love it!

update soon! ^.^

seriously the story is so good in itself, perhaps yeah the same law marriage n everything but the situations n the way the characters act is oohhh great :)
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your version of this story is better, like beyond words. thank you.
person Psych3
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good stuff
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor hermione but i love it already!