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by Gryffindorclutz

schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more soon.
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...it's a bit on the angsty side, but I like it nonetheless. Very good writing style. The story flows well, and I can't wait to read more!
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this very intresting cant wait to see what you do next
person Anon
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your an amazing writer please update soon
person kazfeist
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, I appreciate your intent in writing this story, but I can't continue to read it. The sense of helplessness you are manufacturing for Hermione's character resonates too closely to home. Since you've said it won't end well for her, I can only hope she decides to end her life rather than live it with the horrid creature you've created in your Draco (or in the other author's Draco, which you're re-working). I just can't continue to read it, though. Sorry.
person miakitty
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aarrgghhh its about time,what took u so long??? and why is this so short??u have to write longer chapter. I didnt mean this in a bad way,but i kind of relief when u said this story is not a superlong story.coz i'm anxious to know the ending..and sometimes when u write too many chapters,things started to get messy,like nonsence drama,other pairing and u'll loose the originality of this fanfic.
person jossie
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG diz is bloody brilliant! 5 thumbs up..wohoooo
Hermione strike back,good on u gurl!
Hermione rebellion is the only reson for draco to be hardcore
and u know thats what we all waiting for (wow,am i rapping or what??)
I hav to give u great credit on this one
though,I'm quite dissapointed because u didnt write how draco
get his revenge on hermione.
oh well,what the hell,u will post it on the next chapter rite?
I'll be waiting
person jossie
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS A RESPOND TO A READER THAT DOESNT WANT TO CONTINUE READING THIS AMAZING STORY.
DO U KNOW THIS IS CALL FANFCTION? A.K.A FANTASY FICTION (watevr it realy means)! THIS IS THE RIGHT PLACE WHERE ANYTHING IMPOSSIBLE CAN BE POSSIBLE
ANYTHING CAN HAPPEN IN THE WORLD OF FANTASY.
HARRY CAN BE GAY.vOLDERMORT CAN BE SISSY LIL *&#$. DRACO CAN BE THE HERO.. SNAPE CAN HAVE SEX WITH HIS STUDENT AND GET AWAY WITH IT
EVEN THE USUALLY SMUG KNOW IT ALL HERMIONE CAN BE A VERY GOOD PET
YES IT IS NOT LIKE THE REAL HERMIONE,SO WHAT??IF U MISS HER SO MUCH,GO AND WATCH THE MOVIE INSTEAD,
DONT U DARE CALL MY SUPERHOT DRACO AS EVIL CREATURE! HE IS HOT WHEN HE IS A NUTCASE,AND U BETTER KEEP THAT IN UR HEAD!

TO THE STORY WRITER

I LOVE YOUR STORY
LOVE IT SO MUCH THAT I WILL READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN FOR THE NEXT 10 YEARS!
PLEASE IGNORE THE HATERS,OK, I GOT UR BACK ANYTIME U NEED IT
KEEP WRITING,I'LL BE READING IT
person HoneyB9
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter.keep updating.Draco seem a lil too harsh on her,i do hope he doesnt mean it when he say something cruel like that
as much as i love dark draco and dark fic,i dont like sad ending. Dont kill any of the charachter (or i wont read it)
cant wait for both the wedding and their wedding night.I'm sure draco love hermione despite his bad treatment towards her.I'm excited for another kinky part.Yes i'm sure they will have a great fun tonite (atleast draco would enjoy it)I love the way draco being mean (by this i mean realy behaving like a bastard)toward hermione as if he hate her the most,but still admired her like she was a goddess send from heaven.
U descibe it realy well.It make the story more interesting.and when he sexually punish her ,oh i just love it. i can only dream of being his wife.Lucky hermione,i'm so jealouse.
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dont stop writing,please continue.I understand u have your own life to take care of,but dont leave the story unfinish,i hope you can write dozen of chapters more. maby until after draco and hermione get married and have babies.I want to know how good draco is as a father and husband.If u end it right after they got hitch,i'm gonna cry because that is not enaugh for me~i realy like all the story u've written,i wish u can go on and write more.