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by Gryffindorclutz

schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far so good with how the story is going. I like how Hermione is still fighting Draco though after that last chapter it looks like she is in for a whole lot of pain. I hope there is someway she can survive this without Draco breaking her spirit.
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!

Please make sure he doesn't hurt her to badly. He could kill Nott for all I care. Just don't hurt her.
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit!!!! Nott is in for a world of hurt....and so is poor Hermione....hmm, so why am I excited about the next chapter? : )
person PropsGal
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I just wish that Hermione was pregnant! I get the feeling that Draco would tone things down in order to insure a healthy heir. She also has GOT to find a way to get some of her power back! Keep updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh-oh. That's not good. I can't wait for more, hope you update again soon!
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
only 2 ore 3 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO there has to be more!!!!
Again nice chapter, whats gonna come next??? Please update soon!!!
person jossie
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i begin to loose interest on this fic,you know why? because its not exciting anymore. I love draco dom and posesive over hermione..but if she keep accepting whatever he give without rebelling,thats boring. Why cant she try to do something that he wouldnt expect her to do,like attemp to escape or keep on fighting eventhough they both knew he will win,atleast it will be more fun to read. He cant treat her like a dog,punish her for no reason at all.U have to make hermione a lil bit bitchy somethimes. Make her test draco limit until he explodes with real anger towards her.Add some spice in your story.
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wonder what he is capable of if she manage to get him realy angry.I prefer more hardcoreness,but i know some people dont like the idea.
person ichiruki
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if she's ever going to get the upper hand? Damn if that boy isn't working on some major revenge points, he's racking them up left and right.
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for another chapter! Is Draco ever going to be nice or is he going to be evil for the whole fic? Either way I love it!