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person Roozette
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey!

There is nothing, absolutely nothing, wrong with cliche. I think your story has a cute and fun premise. It is engaging, easy to read, and makes me smile. Keep it up :)

Kisses!
Roo
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yea wtf was that? i loved it!
person ZooArmy
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that Harry's reasons are fucked up, for me they are justified.
Wow, I just realise that I'm completely contradictorily. At first I say Harry exaggerates and now I agree with him. *sigh* I have too heavy mood swings. (^_^) Oi!
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5!!! They both are right to some degree. Now what are they going to do about it?
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! Probably ate it quickly in case Harry changed his mind! Sooo need chapter 3!
person ZooArmy
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*takes cookie with glee* Thank you
I want to hug Draco as well. *sigh*
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm... wow! I really like how this story's started off! Brilliant and I can see it's only going to get better! Keep up the good work and I look forward to following the rest of the story! Do you reckon it'll be finished before Christmas?
Stef
person ZooArmy
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, actually he should be used to Draco sneering, eh? But, hurm, maybe it's something different if it's about personal things. He's real patience, I'd have flipped already out.
Oh, and the cookie was reeeeeeally yummy *grin*
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like!!!:)
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry! Maybe he should remind Draco that he can always go back to Azkaban! I sooo need chapter 4!