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person Roozette
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww.... that was great!

I really liked your ending! I agree that this was the perfect way to conclude the story. Have to tell ya, your outline made me laugh. "Kiss, suck, fuck, love." I had to blink at the computer for a few minutes before giggling helplessly. Such a cute story!!

Kisses and cookies ~
Roo
person shiva
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and i GLOMP YOU NOW!!!!! I LOVE IT! SQUEEEEEEEE HURRY UP CHRISTMAS I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
person SilverKitten
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Amazing, spectacular, fantastic. You deffinately have a BIG new fan! Update is required asap
person Roozette
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! *dances like a loon*

They finally got together! And not even on Chap 12 like I thought it would be! Wonderful Christmas present! Went back and read Chap 10, and I must say I like your improvements. Although, in the original draft, you had Draco pulling down Harry's pants and boxers in one move. In this one, he goes from sitting to sucking Harry in one go. May want to add that line back in.

I really liked this chapter! Tomorrow at the Weasley's should be...interesting. Hehehe... I really like the dynamic you have between Harry and Hermione also. Overall, I just really like it.

Kisses and Love ~
Roo
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow draco got a healthy breakfast after all!
person QueenB
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10 You gotta love smart girls. ;D I confess that's one of the better explanations I've read about his UST with Draco. It sounds as if the sex will be blazing hot, too--although the blowjob is a great start. (Loved the line about high protein. Heh.)
person ZooArmy
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mwhahaha a-fecking-amzing. ROFL
I think I'd doubt my own sanity as well if Draco would do that to me. Ha, this gets better and better. Squee

Merry Christmas!
person Roozette
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy hannah, my darling dear!

Did you post these back to back, or did I just miss a chap? Sorry I skipped a review, but I am actually glad I did. After the kiss (THAT KISS, oh honey thank you!) and then Draco and Harry getting just a little bit closer *smirk* I am glad I got to read them back to back.

*offers plate oc Christmas cookies to your muse* Please keep writing... so close to being done and such an adorable story! Love it a lot.

Kisses!
Roo

PS.
Merry Christmas, or Happy Holidays, or down with the Republic. Whichever you celebrate, my sentiment is there :)
person SilverKitten
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I swore I was not going to leave a review for this one till it was done but...just wow! You're a great writer, and I can't wait for the next story!
person QueenB
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12 Draco certainly is one to keep people off balance. But I didn't like all that casual touching he was doing. That's the sort of thing that borders on sexual harrassment and Harry shouldn't have to put up with that kind of thing in his own home. If I'd been in his place, I would have found a way to maintain distance like a spell to keep Draco at least three feet away or one that would keep him out of the room until Harry was finished with whatever he was doing. Do they have spells like that?