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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm just happy to see you update. ^^ Keep it up.
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! keep going !! never give up!!!
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of this chapter please update soon.
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this has started out as a pretty kickass story and i would love to read more.
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January 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i thought chapter three was up sweety update soon *kisses*
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3!!! What new life?
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! Can't wait to ready the next. Please update soon.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This isn't a terrible story -- certinally not one the results in harsh reviews that would make you cry! >:(
It just needs a bit of work to smooth out the rough edges. ^^
At first, I thought Ginny was stopping him because he was going back home to his rapist Uncle and she was about to prevent that. Instead, her anger and reason for it seemed a little out of place. Then again, this is a rather vulgar rough-and-tumble Ginny you are introducing us to, so we'll just have to wait and see how you shape her personality in future chapters. Ron's a prick (but then again, we all knew that. hehehe).
Keep up the good work. I'm glad to see you've decided to continue with your story despite negative feed back. I say screw all those people. If they don't like it, its their loss. ^^ Until the next chapter!
It just needs a bit of work to smooth out the rough edges. ^^
At first, I thought Ginny was stopping him because he was going back home to his rapist Uncle and she was about to prevent that. Instead, her anger and reason for it seemed a little out of place. Then again, this is a rather vulgar rough-and-tumble Ginny you are introducing us to, so we'll just have to wait and see how you shape her personality in future chapters. Ron's a prick (but then again, we all knew that. hehehe).
Keep up the good work. I'm glad to see you've decided to continue with your story despite negative feed back. I say screw all those people. If they don't like it, its their loss. ^^ Until the next chapter!
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok it was great i wish the next chapter was here
already though ^.^ Now whoever left that rude comment
and made you cry should get there eyes gouged out so
they couldnt read any more fanfiction, since they cant
see how good yours is thay shoudnt be allowed to c at all
already though ^.^ Now whoever left that rude comment
and made you cry should get there eyes gouged out so
they couldnt read any more fanfiction, since they cant
see how good yours is thay shoudnt be allowed to c at all
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its good...i would like it if you could explain more about when and how they did the ceremony to bind them and maybe a bit more background info on how and why they hate the weasley clan and dumbldore. Try to space out your sentences..make more paragraphs and stuff. Maybe get a beta? I really like where this seems to be going though and i want you to keep posting!