rate_review Reviews

Hey thomas & harry... YOU guys BOTH NEED a smack upside your heads!! ya know ya wan' each other bad!! LOLZ

I never expected for Voldemort to dream of things like that. I liked that fact that you made them fall in love through thier dreams

Fantasy, so beautiful. Love it!

It was short but very nicely done. You could have seperated them a bit more since it kinda looks a bit cramped but aside from that everything else was fine

Decent intro... how are you planning on fleshing out the story?
Are you going back to when voldemort started sending the dreams, showing
how Harry deals with them and finally succumbs to them in the final battle? Or
are you going to start with the aftermath of the battle and show how the situation came to be
via flashbacks and dreams... Either way could work out well.
I like the pairing of HarryxVoldemort but I really dislike the uber evil Harry that some write, is
your Harry's personality going to become the violent evil that the canon voldemort possesses? Is your
Dumbles going to be dark and manipulative to make up for the lessening of tom riddle's evil?

You may want to work in smaller paragraphs... when each person talks it should be a new one and switching between
the thoughts or viewpoint of a character should create a new one as well..

Let's get the show on the road can't wait to see how you work it out!