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for The Fire Within

by firefoxzr

person sanda
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
person sanda
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say that I like this story so far. I can't wait to see what else you come up with. Did you get the idea from my challenge? I was just wondering because of the discriptions of the different types of pheonix's described.
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good and original story that you have written, i can't wait until you post more of it.. i
person sanda
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person sanda
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice
person Wendy
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Umm... Just out of curiosity why even bother putting up a 'chapter' if it is just a warning that you haven't written it yet?
You could have written it and then moved onto putting a chapter in when you feel like it, then you don't have people clicking on to this empty link wondering what happened to the story and as to when you maybe starting to update?
Don't get me wrong it sound's like it will be a good story but you honestly have me confused as to why you are taking this method as it will get a few people put off or bored from waiting.
Good luck anyway but I do wish you had waited before posting... It would have saved a few comments and confusion.
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If it's not written, why post it?