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It's really good write more

So you gonna update again anytime ever or not. I very much like this story and how it is original. I hope you keep it going.

More please...this is really good so far...

I started this story and just love it. I can't wait for all the love and jokes to begin but I also can't wait for the phoninx end to come about. Fawkes said at the beginng that four children would be like them I don't remember if she said they would all come from harry's year? I would say Harry of course Neville Draco and Ron as my guess's. Update soon.

Sorry I am writting again. I had read other people's reviews like I usually do and all I saw was that they hated Zoyra *sorry for the spelling* I went on to read a nother story and it kept preying on my mind. I just wanted to say that I like her I like that she isn't exactly like her brother. Even though she does have some of the same quirks she isn't a replica why should she be? She is supposed to be another person right? I am not exactly like my brother *thank the goddess* I think she is the type of person Severus could have been. Severus wanted friends at one time as well had feeling that showed, but the maurders and life before and after Voldienuts made him cold that and her leaving him. So I know that isn't my place but it was bothering me and I had to say something. Keep up the good work and please update soon

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all i can say is thank you for updating goood job

Do you want the good or the bad part of my review first? 'Bad,' you say? Well, okay: I don't like Zohra. (Sorry, but you asked for our opinions when you asked for reviews) She doesn

I'm sorry to say this but part of your story is just plan stupid. The part were Snap faints. That is way ooc for him and I think it would imporove your story if you took it out. The idea is good and the writting is good but that part is just plain stupid. It should be removed.

Wee! I just want to say that I enjoy this story even more with each new chapter. I can't wait to see what Snape has planed for his poor unsuspecting little sister.