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for Playing Doctor

by AlexisRose

schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh!!! i wish he would be my doctor! update soon! but i do hope it wont be only a two chapter story.
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go with it!!! Its really good. But please do add a Non-consentual warning. Not every1 is as sick as me! Good Work though
person Warden
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please continue!

But... So many stories have Hermione giving in to Malfoy or, worse, falling in love with him after he molests her (or worse). Not only is that far-fetched just because of the molestation, but Draco is also a racist who hates Hermione and her people. On top of that, he's done his best to make every years of school hell for Hermione and her friends. Draco is not someone she would give in to in this situation.

Continue, but don't let her give in to him unless she's under the influence of (reversible) spells or the like and in the end, he should get caught in the act and severely punished. Not detentions and lost points either; actual jail time.
person ElizabethGranger
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG LOVE this...can't wait for the update
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hurry and update this is amazing. So hot in a disturbing and sick way, but what the hell, that what I come here to read!
Dawn
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg i want more and i love you for posting this!