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wow, read both chapters was not expecting that...kudos though, I think it was awesome, so I must be a sicko perv, so can I read the alt ending? lol. Can't wait to see what that will be like ;)

I love this story! I do hope you do write an alternate version...simply because this rocked! Whatever you write I'm sure is gonna be great. It would be a shame if you changed your mind about it.

"So what do you think? Should I continue? I don

I hope alexisrose will read this and email me to acknowledge reading this

A happier ending could be one where malfoy stops himself before raping Hermoine. he could take liberties or lick her and do outer-course activities. He could express remorse. and maybe at the end of the story, as an epilogue, hermoine could consent to have intercourse with him because she has perhaps endometriosis and no wizarding healing has helped her. so she wants to get pregnant and Draco admires her enough to want that too. the end of the story could be very fluffy with the 2 of them discussing getting engaged or just promising to be loving towards each other.

ohhhhhhh man poor Draco :(

but i really liked this story :)

hope u write a new one in the future :]

You want a suggestion for an alternate ending... It could be that Draco and Hermione are actually seeing each other and that Hermione and/or Draco has a doctor/rape fantasy and the other is more than willing to oblige. They could have set up a "safe" word that really means stop... since words like "no", "stop", "don't touch me" etc. would be used in a rape fantasy.

AlexisRose - Thank you for reviewing Maelstrom. I do so hope that you read TIME LOST, honestly, its my personal favorite and I think despite a few grammar issues in the begining, it is most other peoples favorite as well. Even those who hate snape/hermione pairings, weirdly.

Back to your story...




Dont listen to those reviewers that may be telling you to change it etc. You DONT have to change a thing if you dont want too. I like the dark parts because its seemed real and tragic.

If you want to write an alternative ending, be my guest but jsut dont be discouraged by reviews telling you to change this story!!!!

It's hard enough to write on here, without being told that your story is good, but needs a different ending?? Come on. Your brillant, and I hope you know that.


Nuff said'


Reirei.

Okay, well done. Sad, but hey, it's your fanfic. I agree on the whole, "how do you make it happy since he raped her" immediately I thought of Luke & Laura on Gen Hops. LOL Yes, showing my age a bit, my mother watched that show religiously and so fdid my step-mother, so no matter where I was, it was on, LOL,. Anway, my point being, fanfiction, alot like soaps, are NOT REAL! So, hopefully people won't be too mean in their reviews, you told them up front in was N/C.
Love to see the alt ending as well.

I thought this was a very well written and gutwrenching two shot and despite the sad ending, it really made my morning. Absolutely recommendable!

Ohhhhhh!!!!! I love dark... Great second chapter. So descriptive that I could see it happening as if I was standing there in the room!