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for Deception Hurts More Than Death

by HHRDestiny

schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it. Harry supposedly loves Hermione more than anything else in the world, even more than the Weasleys. So why can he hurt her when he can't hurt the Weasleys? It doesn't make sense to me.

Other than that little thing, I think your story is pretty good.
Keep up the good work :D
person lily69
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! You're doing an excellent job in portraying the turmoil that Ron is experiencing, moving him between hurt, anger and compassion. I can't wait to read more!
person Nymphe
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sniff-sniff* Do I detect a faked-death senario at work here?
person Muffy
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is quite clever and kind of painful to read (in a way). I have an appreciation for AU fic that twists canon so effectively. Thanks!
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Ron, but he is righ true love should win out in the end. I dont know who to feel worse for. Cant wait for more
person freelke
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter very much. thank you for writing this story. I hope th next chapter is up very soon. I can't get enough of this plot and I want to read more!
person Lisa1352
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter .. I do feel bad for Ron but I never really liked R/Hr or H/G great story
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG this story is amazing I cant wait for more.
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i liked and i dont even read H/Hr.
person pfeil
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great plot bunny!

I'm wondering if that crash was staged...