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for Deception Hurts More Than Death

by HHRDestiny

schedule April 3, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Harry is really stupid in this fic. He complicated everything. If he was just honest and man enough to fight for Hermione and be honest with Ron from the start this would never have had happened. All he had to do is admit to Ron and the Wesleys he & Hermione is in love. I m sure most of the Wesleys would understand. Sure Ron and maybe Ginny would be hurt at first but they'll move on. They'll find someone else and move on and they all can be friends again. 

If they were honest from the start... they wouldn't have to lost their friends or the Wesleys. They wouldn't ahve to leave the Wizarding World just to be together. They all could have been happy. What happens when James turn 11 and get his Hogwarts letter?! They will have to return to the Wizarding World and explain everything how they are alive. That would complicate things. Those 2 are really mad man.

schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story almost made me cry!
person luvhp
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, a cute baby boy. Love and Forgiveness! It's a powerfull combination.
Great story and BTW:

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for not leaving us hanging ;) Hope you have a good, healthy pregnancy.
schedule March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Am in two minds about this story. On the one hand I really like the way you have Ron half mad watching in the penisive and I quiet like the fact that you have Harry and Hermione at it with an affair. But I kind of wish we got more of Ginny, she can be such a stroppy drama queen I'm sure and although it's good Ron saves her and I'm sure I'd of never thought to have our loveable dashing green eyed hero do something so -well bad screw his best friends wife then fake his own death- it does make a rather nice change to the usual idea of he and Hermione being in love and ignorant and then getting together blar-blar-blar. Those stories can be fun but it's time for some bad ass Hermione and Harry stories. Looking forward to reading some more of your work, it kept me going even though I didn't like seeing our hero in such a bad like. You wrote it rather well I thought. Good luck next time round. Thorny-Rose
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this and would love a sequel
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was brilliant. very well done!
person Lisa1352
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter .. great story!!!!!
schedule March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is very difficult to pull off a story like this and still have an ending that is both believable and happy. I enjoyed reading it.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Normally I'm not a fan of H/Hr, but OH MY GOD, I'm so glad my curiosity got the better of me. I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED this story. I was freaking out. OHHHHHHH!!!!!!! You did an excellent job on this.
schedule March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great premise. Heartbreaking to read. I'm glad Ron found real love in the end. Hermione and Harry are cowards as far as I'm concerned. I hope that there's a sequel planned where they have to confront what they did like grown ups do.