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June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have me completely and utterly head over heels for your story. It's amazing, I love how you have the characters. I really hope you update soon. Spectacular work, you never fail to amaze me further with your skill.
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An interesting mix... I definitely like the "Harry/Dorian" character that you've created; he has the right amount of Harry from the books without being so obnoxiously naive. I also like his role as Snape's apprentice, but I would've liked to read more about the how and why Snape turned away from the Death Eaters. I'm anxious to see what happens to Harry now that Voldemort and the Death Eaters are plotting against him!
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! you updated! poor poor sev. what ever shall he do? he's all horny and he can't do a damn thing about it really. now we are only gettig a one-sided view latley in the chapters. how does harry feel to all of this. is it possible that he might have feelings for Sev. he did call moldywart "the pretty man with mean eyes" that does lean towards gay tendancies. please update soon. i have the part where harry is licking the cupcake stuck in my head. *kisses*
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sooo good, love your writing style, haha, i really do like your stuff, read your harry/tom fic and loved it, don't really want to read your fenir fic - not sure if i'll like it, lol, but your writing is very good, ha, the only thing i don't like about it cause my eye sight it shit i normally increase the font, but cause of your pg breakers, when i increase the font it stretches out so its not on one pg, like it goes further and it takes to long to scroll... so yeah, haha, love your writing style though!!
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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really love the story so far and i hope to see more. good luck with the writters block.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the plot of this fic, it's so unusual. i can definitely say that ive never come across anything like it before in the hpverse and that's saying something given how many stories ive read! and i like harry's snake. he's very amusing:) looking forward to reading more. off-topic: i TOTALLY agree with your frustration about good stories that never get completed b/c the author is juggling too many stories. just finish ONE for the love of god! *ehm, sorry about that* anyway, please email me when you update: pwfan626@aol.com. read ya later!
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate WIPs... mainly because of the same reason you've stated in a previous chapter... the dreaded dropped story.
I pray that the muse fairies smile upon you once again!
*sprinkles with muse fairy dust*
I like how this story is dark, but not heavy. You have enough humor and levity to balance out the seriousness. That way you don't want to crawl into a corner after reading the story and cut yourself.... (no offence to people with that problem!)
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Thanks for the great story so far! :D
Eve
I pray that the muse fairies smile upon you once again!
*sprinkles with muse fairy dust*
I like how this story is dark, but not heavy. You have enough humor and levity to balance out the seriousness. That way you don't want to crawl into a corner after reading the story and cut yourself.... (no offence to people with that problem!)
I'm looking forward to your next update!
Thanks for the great story so far! :D
Eve
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, even more than I did the books, which except for the seventh I loved. Other than a few minor spelling and grammatical errors I found the story to be very well written, I am a die hard harry potter fan and your story puts it in a new and interesting light. I sincerely hope you overcome your writers block soon I really would like to find out what happens.
sincerely,
Mirrorhanyou
sincerely,
Mirrorhanyou
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good.
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you can over win the horrible writers block and finish the story...!
Good luck and thx for a wonderful story!
:D
Good luck and thx for a wonderful story!
:D